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Post by natalie on Jul 2, 2009 12:37:09 GMT -5
WOW!!! Very great intense scene, Awesome, action packed, can hardly wait to see what happens next!! Super cliffhanger!! Fang and you are awesome writers!! Can hardly wait to read what happens next!!
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Post by Ronnie on Jul 2, 2009 12:38:04 GMT -5
Yay, I'm glad that you put it up. This is awesome, the hologuises sound really neat!! Can hardly wat for the next update!! Awww... Thank you Natalie X3
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Post by natalie on Jul 2, 2009 12:40:26 GMT -5
Yay, I'm glad that you put it up. This is awesome, the hologuises sound really neat!! Can hardly wat for the next update!! Awww... Thank you Natalie X3 Your Welcome!!
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Post by Ronnie on Jul 2, 2009 12:44:39 GMT -5
Markus groaned inwardly was one of the humanoid blobs [they must have hologuises on…he thought to himself] ran underneath a door into –groooannnnn- Izaak’s room. Well …He or she will be in for an unpleasant surprise…Izaak was a total man-bitch to humans...Markus sighed…Not that he could hold that against Izaak….He himself, use to be worse to humans….much worse…He shook his head. No…This isn’t the time to dwell..Time to focus. He put one foot on either side of the humanoid blob and growled, “What is your business?...Intruder….” He’d get to the other human later…If Izaak didn’t get to him first…. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Izaak groaned. He couldn’t sleep. He kept having dreams of being kept on this shitty hell-hole his whole life. He turned on his lamp next to his bed and rubbed all that was left of his sleep out of his eyes…still a little groggy though he got out of his bed and started to make his towards his bathroom. On the way he eyed his tiny prison ….there was his pet elephant, Momo, in her cage…there was the millions of posters on his walls and lyrics written on the walls…and there was a little funky blobby thing on the floor by his door…Wait…What the hell!?, he thought quizzically looking back at the blob with a groggy/puzzled look. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
The teen made a mad bolt, diving for the narrow space between the door and the floor, rolling under the opening and coming back up on the other side only to be greeted by total darkness… Panting, she scrambled to her feet…straining her eyes in the darkness for any clue to her location…
“Probably a storage room…” She thought…only to be proved wrong a moment later when a light flicked on, on the far side of the room, illuminating what looked more like….a bedroom…
A colossal dresser dominated half of the wall to her left and posters the sizes of buildings covered the walls and ceiling…
Cursing under her breath, Moira started to run towards the dresser, only to freeze when she looked up to see a very large, and not very pleasant looking giant staring straight at her…the same giant she’d seen this afternoon. The moody one who’d destroyed the chopper!
“B-but…my guise!” She looked down, horrified to see the cloak flickering and flashing…she must have damaged the projector when the rolled under the door. “Fuck!” Glancing back at the giant she ripped the cowl off and continued her mad dash for the dresser… “Dammitdammitdammit…” --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Michael glared up at the figure standing over him, daring to even reach up and deactivate the projector in his cloak so that he flickered back into full view.
He didn’t even flinch when the massive boots thundered down on either side of him and the giant growled down at him in a booming voice, “What is your business?...Intruder….”
The ex-marine laughed sardonically… “Business…no business. Just hear to blast every single one of your worthless giant sized asses to kingdom come…” He sneered and opened his cowl to reveal the vest of explosives strapped to his torso… “Been a displeasure talkin to ya…” He said reaching for the switch.
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Post by natalie on Jul 2, 2009 13:29:16 GMT -5
Whoa, Micheal means business!! This is really really good!!
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Post by Ronnie on Jul 2, 2009 13:36:45 GMT -5
Whoa, Micheal means business!! This is really really good!! Thhhannkkk Yoouuu >3<
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Post by giantblackcat on Jul 2, 2009 13:51:15 GMT -5
Moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooore!!!!!!!!!!
Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease!!!!
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Post by Ronnie on Jul 2, 2009 15:08:30 GMT -5
Izaak approached the blob curiously..Wondering what the hell it was. That’s when the blob thing started to flicker causing him to take a cautious step back. “What the hell?....A HUMAN!,” he ended with a snarl as he saw the guise stop flickering revealing a small human. The human threw of the cloak and darted towards his dresser . “Oh Hell Naw, ya vermin!,” he growled as he leapt down towards the floor/human..Using his arms to create a circle around the human…a living blockade. “Ha…I got you..Ya little bastard!!!” -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Markus’ eyes widened at the human’s audacity and anger…not to mention the explosives. Though albeit young, he was a experienced soldier and knew how to act fast. Using one boot he whacked the human lightly with it [he didn’t want to the kill him…he did enough of that in his past…] knocking the small guy into the wall…That’s when Markus dove at the human, just in case he were still conscious and tried to blow himself up again. So, in one swift movement, Markus grabbed the human tore of the explosives and tossed them aside. However, much to Markus’ dismay the button must have accidently push for the moment the explosives hit the floor a loud “KABOOM” echoed through the hallway as it blew up…right by Izaak’s door….”Well…Shit,” grumbled the guard. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Moira let out a shriek of surprise when the barrier of flesh slammed down in her path, causing her to smack into it at full speed and send her bouncing backwards…
She tumbled across the floor with a grunt of pain before rolling to her feet, darting two and fro frantically like a terrified mouse, seeking an escape…only to find herself completely surrounded by the giant’s huge arms. “Oh god…” She whimpered and whirled around, coming to face the huge, smirking face looking down at her…she’d never been so close to a giant before...and if things continued, she’d never be this close again. She’d be dead. “N-no! I won’t die like this!” She growled and bolted towards his arm again, trying desperately to climb and claw her way over…
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Post by giantblackcat on Jul 2, 2009 15:23:47 GMT -5
Feaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar!! TT^TT!!!
COOL!!
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Post by natalie on Jul 2, 2009 15:27:49 GMT -5
Feaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar!! TT^TT!!! COOL!! I agree, with you!! Poor Moira and Micheal!! I like it that there both fiesty and have guts!! You go guys!!
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Post by Fang on Jul 2, 2009 15:44:14 GMT -5
Feaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar!! TT^TT!!! COOL!! I agree, with you!! Poor Moira and Micheal!! I like it that there both fiesty and have guts!! You go guys!! YES! Humans will not be defeated so easily!!! HUZZAH! Lol... Glad you are enjoying the story. ^___^
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Post by Ronnie on Jul 2, 2009 16:00:35 GMT -5
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Post by giantblackcat on Jul 2, 2009 16:06:46 GMT -5
I remember this cartoons when i'm children! XDXDXDDD
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Post by LightHeart on Jul 2, 2009 16:18:09 GMT -5
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Post by Ronnie on Jul 3, 2009 13:41:05 GMT -5
Izaak smirked at the human before him. “Ahahaha! Victorious!,” he said with a wide almost malicious grin. He then heard the human squeak something, but couldn’t quite pick up what he said…Not that he cared. The human then ran over to his arm and started clawing at it and trying to climb over it. “Oi! What do you think you’re doing,” he cried using his free hand from the other arm to grab the human and lifted the human in front of his face…
”Listen, DUDE-“ However something about the human made him stop in his tracks…This was no dude…It was a chick. However, before Izaak could make a snide comment or whatever, a loud “KABOOM” sounded right by his room.
“What the hell!?” cried Izaak running to his door…Using his free hand he grabbed the handle and yanked as hard as he could…only to no avail…
”FUCK MY LIFE!,” he cried/whined. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Michael barely had time to let out a gasp before the huge boot connected with his drastically smaller and frailer body…his vision flickered and he felt himself smack against something hard…several loud cracking sounds and shards of pain racing through his body signaling that more than a few little bones were broken… He groaned as he slumped forward to the ground, but before he even had a chance to see if he could sit up, he felt a strong pressure around his body…he let out a cry of pain as he felt himself being lifted and the vest being ripped, none too gently, from his torso…
A moment later he heard a deafening –KA-BOOM!- and the grip around him tightened…to weak and in too much pain to do much of anything, he slumped against the giant’s fingers. So much for his big plan. “Damn.” He muttered as blackness washed over his mind and he fell unconscious…
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Post by Ronnie on Jul 3, 2009 13:46:36 GMT -5
Markus sighed looking at Izaak’s door and noticing all the small cracks and opening no longer there…His door had been melded shut. Markus knew the moody boy would be not happy. This would also not bode well for the human in there. He turned and started for the main deck to report what had happened..and to get some mechanic to undo Izaak’s door…That poor human…thought Markus sadly…Having grown much more compassionate as he aged physically as well. This poor human, thought Markus as he looked at the unconscious human in his hand….Only to stop dead in his tracks as he noticed something…This human…I know this human... ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
“Ahahaha! Victorious!” The booming voice behind her crowed proudly… “Oi! What do you think you’re doing,” Moira gave out a yelp of terror as her escape attempt was suddenly interrupted when a huge hand wrapped around her and pulled her into the air. Spouting curses like a sailor, she wriggled and kicked…only to freeze when she found herself being lifted up in front of the giant’s face. She whimpered and fell still, staring back at him like a deer in headlights…totally petrified. She was going to die. Just like her family…killed at the hands of a disgusting monster.
“Listen, dude-“
Moira tensed, breaking out of her terrified trance to glare at the giant, “HEY! I’m no-“
A thundering explosion drowned out her answer and Moira found herself scrambling to hold onto her stomach and the finger’s clutching her when the giant bolted to his feet and ran to the door…She blanched, feeling her dinner pushing its way back up and threatening to break out any moment…
“Fuck my life!” The giant cried, rattling the door handle…
Moira moaned, leaning over the side of his hand, one hand firmly pressed over her mouth…
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Post by giantblackcat on Jul 3, 2009 13:50:14 GMT -5
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!! I love this histoooooory!! >w<!!!!
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Post by natalie on Jul 3, 2009 13:53:28 GMT -5
Really awesome update!!This is a really really cool story!!! Yahoo!! The plot thickens!! I think this would be great as a movie!
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Post by Ronnie on Jul 3, 2009 14:02:01 GMT -5
Izaak ran his hand through his spiky black and blonde hair as grumbled curses and obscenities..mostly to himself. Much to his dismay, he was stuck…and not only was he stuck…he was stuck with a human…he groaned inwardly as he looked down at the human in his hand…Almost in disgust…The human was covering her mouth and leaning over his hand which puzzled him a bit before it suddenly hit him. “Aw, hell naw…You better not get sick on me, ya hear,” he growled while making the fatal error of shaking his hand a bit in emphasis. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Moira’s eyes widened then squeezed shut tight as she was jostled again, giving a nauseous groan before leaning further over the side and releasing the contents of her stomach… ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Izaak’s eyes widened and then narrowed to slits as the girl threw up all over his hand…Ewww…My foot too…he thought with a groan. He then glared at the girl and snarled, “Once I’m done cleaning up you’re so dead!” And with that he deposited the girl into his dresser… Specifically his shirt drawer… and stormed off to his bathroom…Muttering curses all the way there. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Moira let out a yelp as she was unceremoniously dropped into one of the drawers of the giant’s dresser… At least her landing was somewhat soft…her fall cushioned by piles of clothing.
She panted and spat, trying to cleanse the putrid taste of her own vomit from her mouth while she looked at her dim surroundings. The drawer was still partially open…a sliver of light shining in to illuminate the small space.
“I’ve got to get out of here before he comes back.” She stumbled to her feet, trying to walk across the soft surface back towards the opening. But do her dismay the crack was at least six feet above her head…there was no way that she’d be able to jump that high. And even if she could, it was only about a foot wide…she couldn’t fit through that. Battling despair, she quickly ran over her options. Hiding seemed to be her best option…so she ran to the far end of the shirt she was standing on and lifted the edge, burrowing deep underneath it…all the while trying to remain calm and not lose her sanity…
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Post by Ronnie on Jul 3, 2009 14:04:30 GMT -5
By the wayyy,
As you may have noticed, Michael and Markus' storyline just sort of ended... And honestly, we never finished. However, Fang [Liv] and Myself will be working on Markus' and Micheal's story as soon as we finish the RP we currently on now [which is the sequel for this RP by the way....]
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