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Post by natalie on Oct 10, 2009 14:49:58 GMT -5
Great story!! I like all the details and descriptions
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Post by natalie on Nov 19, 2009 1:41:09 GMT -5
Awesome update!! I can hardly wait to see what happens!! This is super!!
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Post by natalie on Jan 31, 2010 20:13:52 GMT -5
I can hardly wait till the first meeting!!
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Post by cartoonkitty22 on Feb 19, 2010 18:31:31 GMT -5
short update everyone! And thank you all for your wonderful commits  Now out in the open Viva felt horribly exposed and frightened. Every few seconds she would stop and turn toward Cojin to make sure that he wasn’t about to wake. She couldn’t help but feel like a mouse sneaking around at night. Viva’s mouth was dry and her breathing was shaky with fear. The bowl of food was much further away from her then she had first anticipated, but she continued on with her mission. A sudden loud noise from behind made the color drain from Viva’s face as she spun around expecting the worst. The sound happen again this time causing Viva to jump, but she soon calmed down when she realized that the sound was just Cojin snoring in his sleep. She couldn’t help but to chuckle at herself for freaking out at the sound of a snore as she resumed on her way. Finally Viva arrived at her destination, the food bowl. She couldn’t help but marvel at the size of the bowl, which must have been the size of a large family dinning table. Taking one last look to make sure Cojin was still in slumber land; Viva turned to the bowl and gave it a test push. It was definitely heavy, but not heavy enough to stop Viva from her mission. Taking a deep breath, she pushed her back up to the bowl and began to dig her heels into the stone floor. With a mighty push, Viva grunted as she began to push the metal food vessel closer to Cojin. The bowl squeaked in protest as it was pushed slowly toward its intended destination, causing Viva to worry that it would wake the slumbering titan. Sweat ran down her face from the effort of her task and soon Viva was forced to rest. Breathing heavily, Viva glanced behind her to see how much more she needed to go. Using the scratch marks that were left in the dirt as an indicator to Cojin’s reaching ability, Viva sighed in relief that she was almost to her intended destination. Smiling to herself, Viva once more began to push the mammoth bowl ever closer to its intended owner with renewed strength. |
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Post by Amayasama on Feb 19, 2010 19:44:57 GMT -5
^0^ Aww I'm happy you're still writing this, it's such a cute story <3
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Post by natalie on Feb 19, 2010 22:10:07 GMT -5
Glad your still writing this, its an super neat story
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Post by Satal on Feb 19, 2010 22:21:58 GMT -5
Great update! Go! Go! Push that bowl! You can do it!
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Ridel
Youngling
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Post by Ridel on Feb 20, 2010 20:52:26 GMT -5
I only just started reading this, but I love it so far! Hope to read more soon! ^__^
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Post by natalie on Aug 24, 2010 2:25:30 GMT -5
This is one of my favorite stories, can hardly wait to read more.
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Post by natalie on Aug 31, 2011 0:16:07 GMT -5
Great story!! Keep up the good work!!
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bunny
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Post by bunny on Aug 31, 2011 21:55:29 GMT -5
Write more please! I looove this story! It's a really neat idea. I can't wait to read more!!!
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Post by Amayasama on Sept 1, 2011 10:51:19 GMT -5
XD Guysss don't pressure her or anything if she isn't writing anymore x3 Although I'm sure this is a surprise when she comes back to have new people still reading her stories~
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Tis Amaya from everywhere! *flails* x3 
