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Post by ezzabezza on Jul 23, 2010 8:42:59 GMT -5
Ok erm this is my and my best friend mikobanks3010 first roleplay together, we actually wrote this story a looong time ago but it was never really finished... yeah Constructive critisism appretiated Me: Sam Mikobanks3010: Pipper Chapter 1 Sams povSlowly I made my way up the path to the school, It was kinda creepy! I stared at the tall grey bars they called 'the gates' even looking at them made me shudder! I looked around, I wasn't alone. There infront of me stood a girl, from where I was I could just make out her expression, scared would be an understatement. She looked petrified! Quietly i approached her and gently slipped my hand in hers "Dont worry" I whispered to her "I'll protect you" She jumped at my sudden actions but seemed to relax after a few seconds. Whilst she was trying to calm herself I took in her apperance. She had ((note from ezza to mikobanks3010: ginger hair? i cant remember!)) and the same colour green eyes as me that seemed to sparkel in the light, freckles covered her nose and cheeks that made her just that tad bit cuter! Her figure was one to remember, curvey, just the way I liked it! I started gapping at her she was just... beautiful!
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Post by pippas pov on Jul 23, 2010 9:10:57 GMT -5
it was my first day at school. i stood there infront of an enormous school, i was petrified! suddenly, a boy, probably about the same age as me walked up to me, he held my hand and said to me 'dont worry i'll look after you" at first i was startled and jumped ((this was my first reaction!!)) i looked up and he looked down, our eyes met. he had brown shaggy hair with big brown eyes... he was gorgeous! lets face it, it was love at first sight! but did he feel the same??? i went from feeling cold and alone to feeling warm and safe in his hands........... little did i know, this would become quite literal!
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Post by lll on Jul 23, 2010 9:12:22 GMT -5
it was my first day at school. i stood there infront of an enormous school, i was petrified! suddenly, a boy, probably about the same age as me walked up to me, he held my hand and said to me 'dont worry i'll look after you" at first i was startled and jumped ((this was my first reaction!!)) i looked up and he looked down, our eyes met. he had brown shaggy hair with big brown eyes... he was gorgeous! lets face it, it was love at first sight! but did he feel the same??? i went from feeling cold and alone to feeling warm and safe in his hands........... little did i know, this would become quite literal! p.s. this is pippas pov
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Post by ezzabezza on Jul 23, 2010 9:17:55 GMT -5
2 years later " C'mon pipper!" I laughed as I raced her to the local park. We chased each other around the park, all the while laughing. Pippa chased me into a bush but didn't come in herself, she never really told me why though? Anyway, where was i? Oh yes! I was rumerging through the bush untill something caught my eye. I reached my hand further into the bush and pulled out... a blue water gun? It had a liquid in it that any random person would've thought to be water if only they knew how wrong they was... "Hey pippa?" I cooed evily "Guess what i've got?" I shook it around a little bit and when I saw her face turn blank I couldn't stop a smirk spread across my face "a water gun" I stated the obvious. I chased her spraying the 'water' all over her. This was one of the best things i could've done to make my life a bit more... energetic. But it took pippa QUITE a long time to realise this for herself... ;D
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Post by mikobanks3010 on Jul 23, 2010 15:13:03 GMT -5
pippas pov so there he was squiring me with this water gun that he had just pulled out of a but. and i was loving every second of it, until.......... i saw massive bright flash, i could feel an intense tingling feeling from deep inside me. and i cant remember after that, i was out cold...
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Post by ezzabezza on Jul 23, 2010 15:58:29 GMT -5
I continued to shoot piper with the liquid until it was all gone "oh!" I moaned. Before I could say anything else piper started to glow blue, I reached my hand out to her but as soon as I touched her she dissapeared.
"piper?!" I exclaimed as I searched for her. I was about to check another area of the park when I head something. It sounded like a tiny scream?!
slowly I looked down and couldn't believe what I saw...
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Post by mikobanks3010 on Jul 23, 2010 16:10:42 GMT -5
i slowly started to awake.
i must have hit my head hard! i thought to myself every thing was blurry, as my vision became a little clearer, i looked up at sam, he was........... gigantic!!!! i screamed in terror "ahhhhhhhhhhhh" he knelt down beside me, wide eyed with disbelief. "what the hell happened to you!!!!" i exclaimed...
"me?? what the hell happened to you!! your.. your.. three inches tall!!" he replied
i felt faint, i didn't want to believe it but it was true!! as i looked around to see all of my surroundings 10 times bigger than they used to be, but it wasn't my surroundings that had grown, no, it was me that had shrunk.......
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Post by mikobanks3010 on Jul 23, 2010 16:15:48 GMT -5
it was my first day at school. i stood there infront of an enormous school, i was petrified! suddenly, a boy, probably about the same age as me walked up to me, he held my hand and said to me 'dont worry i'll protect you " at first i was startled and jumped ((this was my first reaction!!)) i looked up and he looked down, our eyes met. he had brown shaggy hair with big green eyes... he was gorgeous! lets face it, it was love at first sight! but did he feel the same??? i went from feeling cold and alone to feeling warm and safe in his hands........... little did i know, this would become quite literal!
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Post by ezzabezza on Jul 23, 2010 16:24:36 GMT -5
There infront of me lied a rather dazed piper. i kneeled down and wasn't surprised at her first remark "what the hell happened to you?!" she asked i could sense the terror in her voice. the fear reflecting off her eyes were unberable!
i had no idea what i stuttered but i know it was something stupid. before i knew it 2 girls and a dog was racing towards me. Frantically i turned to pipper and whispered 'sorry', she looked confused but when she saw my fingers heading for her she seemed to get the message, she started to run but i was too quick and wrapped my fingers around her.
"sorry, sorry, sorry" repeated as i gently droped her in my pocket "can we please play with your dolly mr?" asked one of the little girls "you'll have to catch me first!" i laughed as i raced out of the park.
i could hear small footsteps and giggeling but soon it stoped and i reached my flat. Gently i reached three fingers into my pocket and pulled out piper. She did NOT look pleased to see me!
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Post by mikobanks3010 on Jul 23, 2010 16:40:58 GMT -5
he said "sorry" to me witch at first confused me. but when i saw his hand coming to grab me i soon realised!!
i started to leg it but of course, as i was three inches tall before i got two steps sam had already grabbed me and put me into his pocket.
i could hear muffled words but couldn't quite make them out, he was talking to someone. although i did soon realise that sam was running as i was being thrown around all over the place! at one point i was hanging on for dear life on the very edge of the pocket, i will never forgive sam for that!!!
suddenly the running came to a halt. i saw sams hand reach in for me, i tried avoiding it but that got me nowhere. he pulled me out and placed me in a small red, velvet box. i must admit, that was one comfy box... i fell asleep the moment my head touched the surface.
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Post by ezzabezza on Jul 25, 2010 10:36:51 GMT -5
The glare that she kept giving me made my heart sink but from her body language I could tell she was tired. But, where would she sleep? She couldn't sleep with me because... well... it's just wrong. Me and her sleeping in the same bed, I felt my cheeks grow hot. Then I had an idea. My grandmothers box!
Inside the box was a sea of colours and sparkles, any girl would say it was... what was it? pretty? It was really soft too. Perfect!
As gently as I could I placed pipper in the box, she instantly fell asleep. I just stared at her whilst she slept, she had both legs bent and her arms crossed, her mouth hung slightly agape. My first thought was 'aww she looks so cute sleeping!' but then my more 'mature' side kicked in 'what do you mean cute? how did she get like this? think...think!' I was torn away from my thoughts by a bright light.
I looked down and sure enough pipper was shinning again but this time it wasn't blue, it was yellow?!
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Post by emily13 on Jul 25, 2010 11:34:00 GMT -5
O.o I'm sooo curious!!!!! D: Good plot, though I will now be weary of water guns.
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Post by ezzabezza on Jul 25, 2010 13:24:06 GMT -5
O.o I'm sooo curious!!!!! D: Good plot, though I will now be weary of water guns. Lol thanks Emily ;D I bet you cant guess what the yellow light means...
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Post by mikobanks3010 on Jul 26, 2010 7:04:57 GMT -5
I was fast asleep but i was awoken by a bright light.
I thought that maybe i was turning into my normal size again, my mind was full of relief. But i shouldn't have made assumptions too soon. Thats the problem with me you see, i'm always making stupid assumptions only to be disappointed and proved wrong.
Anyway, before i could even shout to sam about the light, i was ........i was........... in fact, what was i? After that i cant remember what happened.
Had i been knocked out again???
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Post by ezzabezza on Jul 26, 2010 7:36:46 GMT -5
I stared at Pipper, not knowing what to do. Well, what could I do? I had little time to react. Pipper's body started going ridged and stiff her hair turning a silvery white "Pipper?!" I exclaimed, there was another blinding flash so I had to cover my eyes with my arm. Silence. "Pipper? are you ok?" slowly I uncovered my eyes and looked down but to my horror pipper wasn't there. No. Instead lied a small plasic doll with white hair and a spaced out expression...
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Post by mikobanks3010 on Jul 26, 2010 7:59:41 GMT -5
When i awoke (( for the second time!!)) Sam had completely disappeared!!!!!
i searched the house eagerly but carefully, i couldn't get caught. Melissa, ((sams mum)) would freak if she saw me this size! Where the hell did he go??
oh no its all my fault isnt it! he got so stressed about me being this size that hes run away!! Ihave to find him!
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Post by ezzabezza on Jul 26, 2010 11:58:51 GMT -5
'Is that doll Pipper? No it cant be she must be here some- then it hit me, hang on a minute I must've mistaken Pipper for a...doll. Oh no! That must mean that pipper's still outside, that kid was wright it was just a doll. Geeze... I must be going PRETTY mad to think Pipper shrunk and turned into a doll! I've gotta go find her!' and with that I raced out the room to search for pipper.
I searched everywhere for her, but when it's dark and your in the park looking for a girl that you left behind I think you'd be pretty much stuffed!
Tears where running freely down my cheeks as I entered my bedroom, the familiar blue and black designs made me feel a bit more comfortable but it didn't stop my non-stop thoughts of 'what have I done? what if some old pedophile got her? what am I gunna do? how am I gunna tell her parents? aah stupid doll!' I stopped my bombard of thought showers and looked around 'where is that doll anyway? I'll break her in half for making me lose the girl that means the world to me!' tears started dripping from my chin again at the thought of pipper alone, shivering 'argh! focus find that dumb doll and throw it back in the park' I started angrily looking for the 'doll' but to no avail, she wasn't there! 'ay?'
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Post by mikobanks3010 on Aug 1, 2010 14:34:09 GMT -5
i couldnt find him anywhere! where could he have gone, it was pretty late at night to be searching for a someone, but i didnt care. sam means the world to me! i had to find him!
I went back to his house to check if he had gone home, i climbed up the wall on the outside of his house, it was pretty darn scary as i was three inches tall and the wall at least 10 ft high anyway. but i wasn't going to stop until i found him.
i finally got to the top and quietly climbed through the window. when i did, it was really dark;i couldnt see anything apart from outside his bedroom door where there was a slither of light.
i whispered "sam.....sam if your there i want you to know that i....i...."- he quite blatantly wasnt there. i sat there for a minute wondering where he possibly could have gone.
when suddenly i heard footsteps coming in 'sam?' i thought to myself
but it was his little sister, i new this due to the pink fluffy slippers. she came in so i had to hide emidietally, i leaped straight back into the box where sam had placed me.
she turned the light on as she came in, her face completely dropped when she saw that sam was not in his bed. "muuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuum" she screamed Melissa came charging up the stairs "what is it?" "sams gone!!" i small tear trickled down her soft rosy cheek "h...he must be here somewhere" Melissa replied in disbelief and horror.
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Post by ezzabezza on Aug 3, 2010 14:40:38 GMT -5
Not only had I lost one girl but now I'd lost two! I looked in Elle's (my little sister) room just incase she stole the doll from my room No luck.
I sighed and got up from just looking under Elle’s bed when suddenly I heard a scream. It was Elle’s. ''Elle!?'' I shouted as I raced up the stairs. I burst open the door and saw Elle on the ground sobbing. I put a hand on her shoulder, "Elle? Are you ok?" I asked her, she turned around and when she saw me her eyes begun to sparkle, and before I could say anything else she literally leapt at me. I laughed and stood up with her still clinging to me!
“Sam green!” shouted a deathly voice. Slowly I turned around, half expecting to see darth Vader! Instead I saw much worse… MY MUM! “Hey mum what’s up?” I asked casually “What’s up? I tell you ‘what’s up’ young man! You nearly gave me a heart attack!” shouted mum (she seemed to like her loud voice!) “Sorry” I replied sheepishly. Mum just sighed in frustration and walked out the room.
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Post by mikobanks3010 on Aug 3, 2010 15:54:16 GMT -5
I tried to get to sleep at this moment. but it was too hard i couldnt stop thinking about what could have happened to sam. i was so close to nodding off when i thought i heard sams voice in my head, i must have been thinking about him too much. but i was so scared at first that i fell out of the box,,, SAM was standing right there in the door way, casual as ever. i would have leaped over to him emediately if it wasnt for his sister end mum having a right go at him!! i had to wait atlest half an hour until they left sam on his own. "pssssssssssssssssst" he didnt hear me "psssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssst!!!!!!!!!" i repeated. i got lucky this time. at first he looked around, a littke startled i must say! but when he saw me, he took one look at me and fainted!!! "saam, are you ok? "
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