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Post by mikobanks3010 on Sept 8, 2010 11:06:28 GMT -5
Heyy!! this is miko.b and well basically, my best friend ezza has started this really interesting story and has been kind enough to let me help her.
Character 1 description.
Name: Fern
Age: 13
Origin: Enir Tribe
Hair colour: Red
Eye colour: Green
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Post by ezzabezza on Sept 8, 2010 11:38:05 GMT -5
Aww thanks Miko! Ok here's my chara's description:
Name: Ethan
Age: 14
Hair colour: Dark brown with some dark red streaks
Eye colour: Green
Personality: Is really cheeky and sporty. Every girl falls in love with him on first sight. Except one...
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Post by mikobanks3010 on Sept 8, 2010 14:32:47 GMT -5
Narrator
It has arrived...
The moment we have all been dreading...
The moment we hoped would never come...
The Komi tribe were not far away, and that only means one thing... WAR
Meanwhile in the kingdom, Ferns parents- the king and queen-wanted to protect there her from the war, so they decided to send her away to a far away place. As they talked about this, fern over heard, but she heard wrong. She thought that they wanted her gone because they simply didn't care for her anymore. So to save her parents the trouble of sending her away, she decided to run away.
Ferns POV
I ran and ran and ran, gently sobbing, but i had too many tears in my eyes to notice the giant portal in front of me!!! I ran straight into it!
Blackness fell upon me...
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Post by natalie on Sept 9, 2010 1:09:25 GMT -5
( This sounds like a great start !! )
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Post by ezzabezza on Sept 9, 2010 16:35:29 GMT -5
Ethan sighed, 'geeze' He thought 'why do girls have to cling so much?'
Ethan was the most popular boy in school, girls adored him. He never knew why though? Maybe it was his good looks? The way his hair and eye's glimmer in the light? Maybe because he was the best runner in the school?
As he walked along the pathway he saw a bench. Sitting down he closed his eye's and relaxed well, he was relaxed until he heard something strange...
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just a small one today sorry ^^;
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Post by Satal on Sept 10, 2010 9:14:08 GMT -5
Since I am on my phone I cannot move this. This should be in the one on one rp thread, not in with the stories. Amaya can you move it?
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Post by ezzabezza on Sept 10, 2010 13:14:30 GMT -5
Satal - It is in the rp thread 
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Post by Satal on Sept 11, 2010 1:33:25 GMT -5
It was in the story thread. Or so my phone says.
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Post by ezzabezza on Sept 12, 2010 15:31:33 GMT -5
Well my computer must be going wierd because on my computer it says that it's in the rp thread  |
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Post by MoonStarNinja4 on Sept 12, 2010 17:04:59 GMT -5
For me it's also in the RP thread. Satal- I think your phone is playing tricks on you. Lol ^_^ Idk... @ezza & miko- I like the story so far. It's a good start. |
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Post by ezzabezza on Sept 13, 2010 10:58:21 GMT -5
@moonstarninja4 (nice name! XD): Thanks! ;D
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Post by mikobanks3010 on Sept 13, 2010 11:27:09 GMT -5
yeah thanks!! And i knew it was on the RP thread haha
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Post by mikobanks3010 on Sept 15, 2010 15:10:22 GMT -5
When I finally could see clearly, I had all ready come out of the portal, everything looked normal... until i looked down. I was sitting on a 10 ft. tree!!!! I panicked for a while but there was really no time, as I looked down i saw a 5. 6 ft boy!!! There was only one conclusion, I was on a different planet, where people are huge! I had to get out of the tree somehow.
"HELP!!!!!" I yelled at the top of my voice. But no one could hear me, or so i thought. There was only one thing for it, I had to jump! I reluctantly stumbled to the end of the branch. "One ... Two ... Three" I counted whilst squeezing my eyes shut. I leaped. Hoping and praying that I would land nicely. But the fall came to a quick end, too quick. When I opened my eyes I was still off the ground, in fact about 5 .6 ft off the ground. I was on top of that boys head!!
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Post by ezzabezza on Sept 20, 2010 14:46:49 GMT -5
I opened my eye's to something falling one my head. well, I thought it was something but I just shugged it off. It would fall off soon enough.
My mobile startled me, I forgot I had it in my pocket and nearly jumped out of my skin!
I looked to see who it was and sighed as I noticed it was my mum 'well' i thought 'it's better than all those fan girls calling me!'
Reluctantly I answered it, giving my usual greeting.
'Yo' I said.
'Hi Ethan it's your mum' well DUH!
'Oh hi mum what's up?'
'Darling, it's getting late, I want you to come home now'
'Ok whatever bye'
'Bye swe-' I hung up.
I stood up and started walking. I felt something tug on my hair and immediatly my arm shot up, not intendly but it just...did! 'Wha?!'
Another tug and my other arm shot up! And before I knew it I was running!
Unfortunately, just like my luck, a lamp post was dead infront of me and SMACK! I ran face first into it!
'OW!' I screamed 'WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON?!' I reached up to my head but as I did I heard a scream, a FEMALE one?
My body turned ridged as I looked around for the girl but to no luck...
Quickly I ran home and slammed the door.
I quickly walked up the stairs and into my bedroom. 'Phew!' I sighed as I sat down on the bed. I stared at the door for a few seconds, procesing what had just happened then slowly reached up to my head again.
My fingers brushed against something soft so I quickly wrapped my fingers around it before changing my mind. 'Please don't be a squirrell!' I thought.
Ignoring the long shriek I pulled it out my hair and infront of my face.
'OH MY GOD!'
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