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Post by crystalrose557 on Jun 27, 2009 20:35:57 GMT -5
yeah!!!! I'm getting us into trouble WOOO!!!!
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Post by Amayasama on Jun 27, 2009 21:15:31 GMT -5
After lunch, Momo took me to random places like thr the skating rink, the flower shop and the local drug store. I wanted to tell her that I was 59 year old woman with the mind and body of a 10 year old...but why ruin it for her. her? "I heard from a cousin of mine that the mayor go is going to show us something BIG to show us. " Just a few things I caught 83 I can't wait for more! x3 I wanna huggle Maxie!!
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Post by LightHeart on Jun 27, 2009 21:59:42 GMT -5
thanks Ama!!
Maxie:...Huggle?
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Post by natalie on Jun 28, 2009 0:08:29 GMT -5
Oh, Oh, doesn't sound good about the crash in the distance. (cue scary music) Very good update.
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Post by LightHeart on Jun 28, 2009 10:28:26 GMT -5
Chap.4-con't.
"Whoa! What was that?!" inquired Momo as she stood up and looked around.
I looked at her in shock. Momo wasn't even scared...like I was. The crashes sounded off like rhythmic footstep. Yep...That's Maxie. Some of the people in the park started yelling about an earthquake while police called via megaphone that everything was alright. In my world, thing were far from alright. My heartbeat accelerated at breaking speed. My body tighten with everyone of Maxie's footsteps. Thump...Thump...Thump...Thump.
"I can take it!" I screamed. I ran for the nearest building with Momo at my heels. The faint scent of blood came to my nose. Screaming filled my head. Everything spun and turned, like a Merry-go-round of doom. I fell to the ground, curled into a tight ball, and wept.
"Mins!...Minnie!...Open your eyes!" Momo's voice commanded, "There's a giant here!...He's tethered to a bunch of helicopters but there's a REAL LIFE GIANT here!!Eeeee!" She sounded so joyful...she doesn't even know what he can do...He could kill without even trying.
The footsteps were ringing of the sides of the building now...Everything was shaking...just when I felt like the ground would rip apart...it stopped.
"O...M...G..." Whispered Momo. There was awe in her voice..and it kinda sounded...enamored. I looked past Momo's face to see Maxie looming over us.
His face was emotionless...Eye tinted with red...Face slightly flushed with anger....
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Post by giantblackcat on Jun 28, 2009 11:02:01 GMT -5
O-O!!!
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Post by crystalrose557 on Jun 28, 2009 15:01:17 GMT -5
sweet! we're in trouble... I mean NOT sweet we're in trouble great update
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Post by LightHeart on Jun 28, 2009 16:59:33 GMT -5
Maybe
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Post by masquerade on Jun 28, 2009 20:49:02 GMT -5
"Merry-go-round of doom" lol
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Post by LightHeart on Jun 29, 2009 0:15:56 GMT -5
Chap. 4-cont
Maxie stood over us threateningly. He got so close to Momo and me that I could feel the heat coming of him. Fear was rising in me like the morning sun.
"B-brother..." I managed to squeak,failing to hind the fear in my voice," I-I-I d-d-didn't know y-y-you'd be here so.."
"Enough. Come with me...Both of you." rumbled Maxie. He lowered his hand and ushered us on.
Momo was exhilarated to be in Maxie's hand. She bombarded him with questions that Maxie didn't reply to. He simply told her the calm down and sit so she wouldn't fall. I grasped on the his index finger, not wanted to look down or move at all for the fear old falling. I closed my eyes and whispered quietly to myself. "Just a dream....Just a dream...Go away... Go.......a.......way...."
When we arrived at our destination,the park, Maxie didn't put us down...Much to my dismay and Momo's delight. I peeked in between Maxie's fingers to see a over-dressed pompus man who I assumed was the mayot and several policemen and women.
"You said she would be save until I got here...yet here I find her on the ground where none of you idiots to be seen!!" Maxie bellowed.
I cowered in this palm; I knew his anger wasn't not directed a me or Momo...but it was scary....
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Post by natalie on Jun 29, 2009 12:57:56 GMT -5
Whoa, I'm glad Maxie isn't mad at Min!! Really awesoem updates
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Post by crystalrose557 on Jun 29, 2009 15:05:58 GMT -5
Sweet! We're not in trouble and I love how I still don't have any idea how serious the situation is! Bravo Lightheart Bravo
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Post by LightHeart on Jun 29, 2009 15:10:04 GMT -5
*bows* Thank you, thank you! I mixed some of my personalty into her! or uh...you?
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Post by LightHeart on Jul 1, 2009 20:33:19 GMT -5
Maxie continued to show his displeasure at the mayor by insults and and curses. Momo simply swung her legs of the side of his hand, content with the whole scenario. I scuttled to her and pulled her to the center of Maxie's palm.
"Momo! Why are you so nonchalant?!? Don't you know the danger we're in? He can kill us! Doesn't that worry you in anyway?!?!" I whispered in her ear.
"No." piped Momo happily.
"Why doesn't it?!" I hissed. Her logic was getting on my nerves.
Momo turn to me and as soon as her eyes locked on mine, I saw wisdom beyond reason. "You can't let fear control you...You gotta take charge!"
I stared at her. The disbelief on my face was clear. I admired her but envied her at the same time...
"You're so fearless....but so some times,Fear is the appropriate response."
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Post by giantblackcat on Jul 1, 2009 20:39:00 GMT -5
I like Momo! She's funny! XDXDXDD
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Post by natalie on Jul 1, 2009 21:05:44 GMT -5
I like Momo, also!!, great update!! I like the changing throughtout the story of the relationship between Maxie and Min!! Super story!!
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Post by LightHeart on Jul 2, 2009 15:42:55 GMT -5
I'm soooooo sorry that these updates are short......:,(
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Post by giantblackcat on Jul 2, 2009 15:44:36 GMT -5
Don't worry! ^w^!!
They are short but soo good!
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Post by natalie on Jul 2, 2009 15:59:11 GMT -5
I'm soooooo sorry that these updates are short......:,( Thats allright. no prob!!
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Post by evie on Jul 3, 2009 17:02:17 GMT -5
LOVE THIS! Keep going!
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