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Post by Ronnie on May 13, 2009 15:00:31 GMT -5
True...I'll have to work on that.....I'll probably go back and fix it later...I just have to figure out what to write first @__@
Thanks again for the constructive criticism :]]]
and yeah....Ryan really needs an @$$-kickin'...Lol
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Post by jaco on May 13, 2009 15:16:17 GMT -5
No problems, Ya know, Im no writer either and I find that it has helped me so much when someone has taken the time to really read my work and let me know where I can improve it. I think you have a really good story here. I wouldnt have read over it three times if I didnt
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Post by Amayasama on May 13, 2009 19:28:09 GMT -5
YAY! I re-read it! *flails*
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Post by Ronnie on May 16, 2009 16:41:05 GMT -5
I set up a Q & A [Questions and Answers] for this story...so...any questions can go though...and THEN I can work on incorporating those answers into my story....I just have to figure out how to do it smoothly...>,<
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Post by jaco on May 22, 2009 17:31:57 GMT -5
So when do we see the next part ;D Im left hangin here wondering what Ryan is going to do next! And how Loraine is going to deal with it all.
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Post by Ronnie on May 22, 2009 17:45:17 GMT -5
Once I get inspiration..I will write...Right now I feel creatively drained ;3;.....
Sorry about the delay, guys... ^^;
I'm working on it...It's just a sloooowww process.....
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Post by natalie on May 22, 2009 17:49:52 GMT -5
Thats O.K, its hard work writing a story!! There isn't any rush.
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Post by giantblackcat on May 22, 2009 17:55:39 GMT -5
ooook!! ;D!!
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Post by jaco on May 22, 2009 18:01:00 GMT -5
Once I get inspiration..I will write...Right now I feel creatively drained ;3;..... Sorry about the delay, guys... ^^; I'm working on it...It's just a sloooowww process..... I know how that goes, I stopped writing on my first story, The Low Road, for almost 5 months. I had writer's block really bad. Take your time, no rush!
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Post by Ronnie on May 22, 2009 18:56:38 GMT -5
Haha...Thanks for the support, guys ^__^
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Post by Ronnie on Jun 9, 2009 11:03:13 GMT -5
Just letting you guys know I haven't forgotten about this story....
and that I'm probably going to totally re-write it...meaning I won't be updating it for a long time...sorry :/
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Post by Ronnie on Jun 22, 2009 16:49:26 GMT -5
Hey guys...I decided I'm just going to finish writing out my story as it is...meaning I'll just re-write it later..after I finished it...I feel that makes more sense XD;
Anywho, I'm currently writing the next section so hopefully I'll be updating this soon...ish...yeah >,>;
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Post by natalie on Jun 22, 2009 19:05:42 GMT -5
Yahoo!!
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Post by Ronnie on Sept 28, 2009 14:57:20 GMT -5
Hey...Guys...Just saying I'm going to Re-write this story totally. I've made adjustments to the Utopia world and so if I kept the story the way it was then there'd be too many contradictions. Sorry ^^;
It will probably be awhile before I get to the story....Sorry again <:[
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Post by Ronnie on Oct 14, 2009 11:12:48 GMT -5
Soo....I deleted this story...Sorry ^^;;
Though, I swear...I'm rewriting it soon-ish....
I just really wanted to take down this crappy version ^^;;;
Sorry again!
-Ronnie <3
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