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Post by Satal on Oct 8, 2009 14:55:05 GMT -5
There is no poll? Hm... :/
I just wanted to know who reads my stuff. If you have read any of my stories, please tell me which ones and which is your favorite? And to add why you like my writing would be great.
I personally like Koro no Tengu the best of my work and Seeing Eye to Eye best on this site as of now.
My personal opinion, PLEASE do not be offended.
Want to contact me?
MSN: tooru123@live.com
AIM: brotherpetro
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Post by Ronnie on Oct 8, 2009 15:06:37 GMT -5
LOL...I'm totally not offended...
Being the administer of this site, I'm not going to say what's my favorite story [if I have a favorite story that is...I hate to compare writing styles...though Neon's work does flow rather well >,>...and so does other people's ....mmyeah...back to my original point]
As for your works, hmm...I've just started reading them and I'm wayy behind ^^;;;;;;;;
Though, I'm also behind with everyone else's stories....lllOTL
why can't I be a reading guru like Amaya or Yoyo DX...lol
anywho, as to which of your story's of yours is my favourite, Satal, well...I'll get back to you on that...
P.S. TO Everyone: I'm sorry for being such a bad administrator DX.....I totally suck...
that and I get consumed with school [and *cough*RPs*cough*]
I'll get right on commenting on stories this weekend...4 day weekend, betches! Hell yeah! xDDDD
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Post by giantblackcat on Oct 9, 2009 14:27:14 GMT -5
Kool-aid!!! >w<!!
I need say more? XD!
I can't say anything for the style because for me, in English, all are the same ^^;
But maybe that's my favourite because I read the previous in SM.
Or only because I love when Kool-aid and Amy are alone ·w·!
Continue, please! >w<!!
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Post by natalie on Oct 9, 2009 16:58:48 GMT -5
I like it when Kool-aid and Amy are alone too!!
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Post by Satal on Oct 10, 2009 11:29:16 GMT -5
Please do not take offense to this Nat, but this thread is for feedback. I am glad that you like those scenes, but I need more.
I made this thread to see what I should continue with, scene-wise and story-wise. Just talking of one scene and not giving me anything else is not really what I am looking for.
So if you please give me more, I would greatly appericiate it.
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Post by natalie on Oct 10, 2009 13:28:40 GMT -5
No, I'm not offened, I think you have a deep writing style and add depth to the characters with emotion and character development.
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Post by Ronnie on Oct 10, 2009 13:46:01 GMT -5
Hmm...So I just read your After Dark....so..I guess you could say that's my favorite for now XD...
as for favorite character, in that story it would have to be Mark...I know, odd right? But, while not the most developed, he seems the most believable to me [not that your other characters aren't believable..>>;.....well..besides Gear, but he's a friggin robot/weapon/thingy xD]. I like how Mark's protective of his siblings and how he reacts to Gear...It's the most natural...Though Victor' s reaction comes to a close second ^^ [though, in my opinion, Victor become attached Gear rather fast...].
As for Feedback on After Dark, I'd have to say that it's well-written, and the expression of emotions are stellar. However, there is a contradiction in the story. At one point, Gear said to Victor that he is NOT a robot, but a weapon.....and later on, Gear said to someone [forgot who ^^; ] that he was a robot...
Other than that, Good job *gives a thumbs up* ^___^
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Post by Fang on Oct 10, 2009 13:52:53 GMT -5
Well, as I've said before...I LOVE Kokoro no Tengu, cause it seriously feels like it should be found in some old book of Japanese Folklore. Seriously seems like it could be a traditional Japanese legend or Faerie Tale...^w^ I love it! Well...that and I love the poetic and descriptive style you're using to write for it...paints a vivid picture in the reader's mind. ;D
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Post by LightHeart on Oct 10, 2009 16:53:07 GMT -5
I agree with Fang. Tengu is a wonderful story upon Japanese folktale. I do enjoy You're Never Alone, but I liked the way you started it on SM, the beginning feels rushed.
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Post by Neon on Oct 10, 2009 21:06:39 GMT -5
I have read YNA and After Dark, and part of Tengu. The only reason I haven't followed Tengu as much is because, with all the (increasingly many) Japanophiles around me, I just feel overwhelmed by it, y'know? Japanese overload. I'll get around to it eventually, I promise (I have incentive because of your great track record ;D ).
You're Never Alone (I did read the original on the other site, once upon a time ...) quickly became one of the stories I would always go to first should there be a new post. I adore the characters, and the way they contrast and interact with each other. The storyline has the right amount of intrigue without being too vague, while also offering plenty of fun details while we wait for what happens next. >w< Your style has developed and matured considerably. Kudos to that!
After Dark, as you warned, already has hints of grim to it ... not too much, but it's still there. The fact that you could remove yourself from the lighter fiction-verse of YNA to write something darker speaks of your versatility. A suggestion is to watch out for the pacing; a lot of stories that we really like tend to rush to our favorite parts ... it happens to the best of us. But it's important to remember those in-between events for it all to flow well. :J
Aww, thankies for the compliment, too. :3
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Post by Amayasama on Oct 11, 2009 17:32:47 GMT -5
x.x Ohhh it's too hard to pick but I'd have to say You're Never Alone. ^^ I like that one because of all the different giant's personalities and how they work together. That and the little love triangles in it make you wonder who she'll pick as her favorite XD I think it's an enjoyable story my dear <3
But I love Tengu because I'm a Japanese freak xD Plus I love demons...pretty much anything fantasy but having one of the main characters as a demon is awesome x.x
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