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Post by Amayasama on Aug 21, 2009 12:12:30 GMT -5
;^; Poor dears...*hugs them*
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Post by natalie on Aug 21, 2009 20:17:33 GMT -5
Yes, very cool update!!! :> Poor Rune and Emiko!! I think this reads like a movie!! It is great!!
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Post by nocturnalbirdie on Aug 24, 2009 0:34:16 GMT -5
@ Giantblackcat:..XD thanks!!!
@ Amaya: Emi:..*clings*..D,; Rune:..o.o..........er..thank you?......how did you get in here?..Sofia! are you letting more Americans in?!
@ Natalie:..heh..yah....these two just do get beat on....^^; ...thanks so much Natalie!!!! its really great to know that people are liking this. :]
..and thanks everyone whos commented! Im sorry that I myself dont comment back much...Ronnie does it the most cause Im really forgetful....^^;;
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Post by Amayasama on Aug 24, 2009 16:00:40 GMT -5
XD Haha don't blame her ;D I'm just that sneaky! >D
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Post by Neon on Aug 25, 2009 18:15:49 GMT -5
What an odd "punishment." Though I suppose it could be worse by a lot. I'm wondering how it will play out, but then, it's hard not to.
And still the characters and details are strong, yay!
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Post by natalie on Sept 2, 2009 1:59:24 GMT -5
I like it that the characters, details and storyline is strong!!
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Post by cutiedani21 on Sept 3, 2009 12:20:45 GMT -5
wow! this story is great!
Can't believe i never read this before its def one of my favorites on here (:
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Post by natalie on Sept 6, 2009 23:35:25 GMT -5
Its one of my favorites, too :>
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Post by natalie on Sept 28, 2009 2:14:23 GMT -5
Please update when you have time!!
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Post by nocturnalbirdie on Oct 3, 2009 3:26:00 GMT -5
As a tired feminine voice croaked, “H-hey.. What’s going on?”, Sofia abruptly jumped and swiveled towards the source – Namely, Emiko. Rune probably would have done the same if his entire being hadn’t felt like lead.
“Oh..Emiko…You’re awake,” spoke Sofia with a slight nervousness in her voice. ..Though not enough to prevent her English from coming out clearly. Rune, though, at the moment, couldn’t think his way out of a paper bag…Thus, Swedish only registered in his mind. “[In Swedish] What did she say? Is she hurt? Is she alright? Dammit, Sofia, answer me!”
Sofia responded to her brother with a light slap in the face. “[In Swedish]…Give me a minute, Rune…I can only talk so fast..She’s just asking what’s going on…No need to be so fucking demanding…” Switching over to English, Sofia turned to Emiko and spoke up, “Emiko..How are you feeling…Are you hurting..I can get you some pain medication if needed…Or are you hungry..Thirsty…Whatever….” Sofia didn’t want to bring up Emiko’s new implant just yet….However something told Sofia…That Emiko would feel that lump –albeit a small lump – on her side sooner rather than later…
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Emiko felt annoyance stir as Sofia worriedly offered to help as she slowly recovered. But she pushed the emotion aside and rearranged her position on the bed to face the Swedish girl better. A small pain stabbed against her side, causing her to wince. ‘Great..so I’m dazed and bruised.’
Frowning, Emiko looked at Sofia, “No..I think Im ok. But I seriously need some info here Sofia.” All of the frustration that had been building over the last few confusing hours was beginning to simmer again, pushing through the haze in her mind and helping her think. “How about telling me why your brother and myself were shot at like it was open season in the House From Hell?”
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Sofia shifted around uncomfortably before giving off a huge sigh. “Umm…Where to begin…Where to being…I did tell you my father is a scientist, correct…?”
“[In Swedish] Not to mention an insensitive jerk…,” Rune interjected.
Sofia turned around and glared at her brother. “[In Swedish] Rune…Shh..Let me talk.” Switching back to English, she turned back Emiko with a apologetic smile. “Forgive all the Swedish..Rune is still to out of it to comprehend English..I mean..It’s not like it’s out first language…Anyywayyys, where was I? Oh Right…My father… He’s a very secretive person…Rune being the most biggest kept secret of them all. Soo…He just wants to make sure to keep Rune a secret….Thus, he wanted to kill you… He’s not a bad man though..Just very protective of his family… especially his only son,” added Sofia almost bitterly.
Biting her lip to keep from saying more, she continue in a business-like fashion, “Our father saw how much Rune cared about you…so he let you live…For a price…if you recall him saying that….Well..The price is that you and Rune are stuck together…Literally to a certain degree…If feel to your left below the rib cage and above the hip bone you will most likely find a lump…That is your tracing device…Plus more….If you and Rune get more than 300 feet from each other…Then well…each of you will suffer a painful shock...Sorry,” she added with true sorrow in her voice…For this was the end of “life” as Emiko originally knew it….
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Emiko sat in shock as Sofia explained, and a hand immediately moving to her left side. Just were the Swedish girl said there would be, Emiko felt a very small bump just under her skin. ‘Shit..when I moved earlier…this is what felt bruised….’
Her hand moved from her side to cover her mouth just as a whimper was about to escape. Sofia’s words settled in her mind and the full implications hit, crashing through the mental haze. The girl could hardly comprehend all of it though, that she was now supposed to be attached to a guy she hadn’t even really met for the rest of her life. ‘And a GIANT at that!’ Emiko’s black-haired head fell limply into her hands with her elbows on her knees.
Any strength the girl had gathered before simply left, leaving her muscles feeling deflated and unconnected. Emiko knew that she should fight what was happening, find a way to escape, but right now she simply felt too tired. ‘Too useless…no matter what I did I couldn’t change this. I should have….I should have done so many things different,’ she thought as tears started to slip down her cheeks.
Swallowing hard to steady her voice, Emiko didn’t look up as she forced it to work. “S-so I’m a prisoner here? I c-cant leave so I can be his…,” her mouth curled in anger as she tried to find the words, “h-his…what?! I-I’m going to be a GIANT’S pet for the rest of my life?!”
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Still facing the opposite direction, Rune laid still has jumbled up words entered his brain. First came his sister’s voice, “Secret…Only Son…You and Rune..Together..tracking device…Painful shock…sorry…” These simple words made Rune’s already heavy and achy muscles to feel more so as reality sunk in…Before Rune could manage any words, Emiko’s voice piped in. “prisoner…can’t leave…his…pet…”
These words continued to swirl around his heard like a tornado…with just as devastating results…Only instead of his house being demolished…it was his heart…For she hated him…and despite not really knowing her… and not really knowing why he cared…It HURT…
Sofia felt her anger rise and her lips purse as she listened to Emiko’s rant. How dare she insinuate this is my brother’s fault…HOW DARE SHE! She reached back to slap Emiko in a fit of rage, when a hand stopped her. Her head whipped around and she gave out a gasp.
“[In Swedish]Father!”
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Post by nocturnalbirdie on Oct 3, 2009 3:33:19 GMT -5
oh! hey lookie! an update!! ,xD ...lol...so sorry guys that it's been awhile since the last update. this RP is moving rather slow cause of Ronnie's and my own schedule, and we like to take our time with the posts to make sure that they are good enough. ^^; @amaya: Rune:....[in Swedish]..oh lovely...-____-.. @neon: heh..yah it kinda is isnt it?...but then again daddy dearest isnt probably the most level emotion or sanity wise either. ><' ...lol..and it gives a reason for Emiko and Rune to stay near each other....>x] natalie: thanks for all the love Natile!!! both me and Ronnie try really hard to make this RP into a good story. ^_________^ cutiedani21: thanks!!! Im really really glad that you like this story! *hugs* XD
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Post by natalie on Oct 3, 2009 10:43:00 GMT -5
Your Welcome, Great update, I like the drama and the cliffhanger, Poor Emiko and Rune. Super job!!
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Post by Amayasama on Oct 3, 2009 12:41:04 GMT -5
D: Oh noes...Rune ish sad....*hugs him*
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Post by natalie on Oct 5, 2009 18:56:30 GMT -5
Your Welcome!! I can hardly wait to read what happens!! Yahoo!!!! :>
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Post by Ronnie on Oct 13, 2009 14:19:53 GMT -5
((I'm going to post the rest of the RP Story Birdie and I have done done for we will be continuing it through this site :3
Note: I'll translate the English to Swedish later for those parts...I'm feeling lazy right now lD; ))
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Post by Ronnie on Oct 13, 2009 14:24:45 GMT -5
The tears had started to fall harder from Emiko’s eyes as the silence begun to build after her rant. She kept her head lowered and her eyes on her lap to hide the majority of her tears, hating to show the Swedish girl how beaten she felt.
Emiko knew that some of the things she had said had been hateful and directed at the wrong people. But the teenage backpacker was too far into her own grief and other chaotic emotions to really care who she could possible hurt with her words. Her arms crossed in front of her torso with the hands clutching the opposite arm, while her shoulders slumped forward. Emiko bit her lip to keep the sobs from breaking out of her mouth.
The girl was oblivious to the raging anger building in Sofia and didn’t notice that her hand risen to strike the American girl. But Emiko quickly looked up with wide startled eyes when Sofia gasped, wondering what new terrible event would change her life for the worse. ‘Shit!! It’s the crazy father!’ Emiko sat still tightly hugging herself, waiting to see what the man wanted. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Rune’s hurt look softened, as he heard Emiko’s sobs…It broke his heart…it really did. If he could do anything, he would have gone back in time and prevented this all…But he couldn’t do that…He was helpless at the moment…and he knew it.
His eyes widened, as he saw Sofia about to hit Emiko, but before he could put a stop to it, someone else did. Rune’s eyes narrowed as he echoed what Sofia just said.
“[In Swedish] Father…”
However, before Rune could continue saying something, Mr. Bergstrom spoke up. The self-claimed authority in his voice drowned out even Rune’s booming voice. Unlike before, Mr. Bergstrom spoke in heavily accented English. “Emiko, welcome to your new home..I hope you enjoy your stay…” With a one last serious stare at Sofia as if warning her not to touch Emiko, Mr. Bergstrom left the room in an almost hurried pace..as if he had somewhere to be.
At first, Sofia and Rune were to stunned to say anything, before Sofia gave a nervous, exasperated laugh.
“Well…That was anti-climactic!” ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Shocked and caught off guard by the abrupt coming and going of the Swedish scientist, Emiko sat frozen watching his quickly retreating form leave the vast laboratory. For a few moments she stayed in the same position, her arms crossed over her torso and hands still clutching the other arm, with her eyes open startlingly wide.
‘That’s it?! That’s ALL he has to say to me?,’ the thought came out erratically, causing a slightly hysterical giggle to escape her lips. Emiko put a hand over her mouth to stop the crazy sounding laughter, but it continued, bubbling out of her mouth.
The young American felt like she had lost all control, and the world around her wasn’t making any sense at all. How could her world go from discovering a different but still known country, to now being the captive of a Swedish Dr. Frankenstein, his seemingly harmless daughter that had brought her into this twisted reality, and “the monster” who wasn’t actually a monster. ‘Heh…if anything….Rune is the hero in this story,’ the thought came out broken by giggling hiccups.
Though the hysterical giggling was starting to subside, tears had fallen unnoticed down her cheeks and were now reaching the edge of her jaw. And Emiko couldn’t deny that in the chaotic mix of all her emotions that there was a definite, even though very small, warm feeling when she thought of the odd young man. Laying slowly down on the hard table under her, Emiko tried to steady her breathing and her thoughts, finding herself focusing on the pull towards the giant that had tried to save her from the madhouse. Though she was confused by it, the attraction to a hot guy was something that was familiar and it helped her calm down.
Closing her eyes, she took one large breath and tried to push all of the emotional knot to the side. She had to try and concentrate. Fear, adrenaline, anger, and a million other things had been driving Emiko since she had left the café earlier today. ‘What time is it anyway?’ Sighing wearily, she opened her eyes and looked up at the ceiling far above her. “So..what now?”
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Post by natalie on Oct 14, 2009 2:45:24 GMT -5
((Really really really great update!! ))
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Post by Ronnie on Oct 14, 2009 11:52:54 GMT -5
((Holy crap! I finally wrote a post for this XDD;;;.....Anyways, here ya go Birdie...now respond >:0...lol....J/K...Take your time...Lord knows I did >___>;;....))
Sofia pursed her lips at the hysterical laughter of the American girl. She didn’t know whether to be angry, relieved, annoyed, or worried. It was quite the odd mix of emotions she felt. However, Sofia knew Rune probably felt worse. Being his sister and knowing things, she could tell Rune got quite attached to the girl in this short amount of time. Frowning, she turned back towards Rune. Who looked like he was prepared to either cry or laugh himself…or perhaps even both just like Emiko.
Rune was frozen… Oh! How he wanted to comfort the laughing girl. But, he didn’t know what to do. He knew that laughter wasn’t normal…It was…well..He couldn’t place is finger on the emotions. However, he knew they must have been overwhelming. He didn’t even think she noticed the tears streaming down her face. With each tear, Rune felt his heart break more.
Finding back his English, he whimpered softly to himself as he looked down, adverting his eyes from the girl, “This is all my fault…”
However, Emiko speaking up caused him to look up again.
“So… What now?”
Sofia responded with a soft, sad smile, “Heh…I haven’t a clue…..”
Rune remained silent.
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Post by Amayasama on Oct 14, 2009 15:30:02 GMT -5
((D: Aw Rune hug heeerrrr! *Flails*))
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Post by Ronnie on Oct 14, 2009 15:48:27 GMT -5
(( Rune: h-hug her? >//////////<.....
Sofia: heh...he's kind of shy...just a little XD;
Rune: -////- ))
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