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Post by bookworm101 on Nov 22, 2009 13:29:22 GMT -5
Hi! This is a role- play between pr and I. Uh, this is my first rp with anyone, so you know, critisism welcome and what not. Yeah....
Me- Olivia
pr- Rin
I'll start the story later on today.
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Post by natalie on Nov 22, 2009 19:31:29 GMT -5
Yahoo!! I can hardly wait to read it when it starts!! (waits eagerly, biting my nails) :>
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Post by bookworm101 on Nov 22, 2009 20:36:45 GMT -5
Lol! Like I said on my other story, I may not be able to start it tomorrow (we both agreed I would start it off) because of my volunteer work. But, we'll see. Maybe I'll find time later in the day.
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Post by natalie on Nov 22, 2009 21:16:52 GMT -5
Cool, Good Luck with your volunteer work.
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Post by bookworm101 on Nov 23, 2009 21:20:33 GMT -5
Thanks, Nat. Don't worry, it did go well. A Little boring, but good nonetheless. Olivia flopped onto her bed with an exasperated sigh. She was so glad that this hellish school year was over. Her first year of high school had not gone as planned. She was shunned away from most of the kids for being considered the weird girl... again. Sure, she didn't like most of the things her peers liked, but that didn't make her weird. Did it? Well, she thought, At least I'll be able to get away from those jerks for three months. More time for me to go hang out by the water fall.The waterfall near Olivia's house was her absolute favorite place to go to. The crystal waters and the beautiful flowers harboring them it made it all to irresistible to stay away from. But, the thing Olivia liked most about it was the rock climbing. Hanging over the long stream of water was a tremendously giant wall of rocks. One that Olivia absolutely loved to climb. Olivia growled to herself. How she wished that there was some way she could get away from everything. School, home, just life in general. Sometimes I wish that wall would just let me climb to my escape. I don't care where it takes me. Anything has to be better than where I am now.She sighed to herself. Guess I better get started on my summer reading. The quicker I get it done, the faster I can start reading those mythology novels I just bought.Yep, if there was one thing this girl loved, it was mythology. She loved to learn about the cultures of people long before her time. She loved their beliefs, their tales, their myths, and most of all, their romance. Sighing yet again, she shoved her hand into her backpack and pulled out the book she was assigned to read. She cracked open it's hard cover to the first page. Romancing with Gods will have to wait, she thought, because for right now, I've got to read, she took a peek at the title, Of Mice and Men. Hooray.Alrighty. There you go. The start of our rp. Remember, criticism welcome. ....Somehow I just knew I would find time to post it today.... :3. By the way, here's a pic of Olivia: media.photobucket.com/image/anime%20brown%20haired%20girl/Mafta91/Brown-Hair.jpg?o=97Pr, could you post a pic of what you think Rin looks like when you do your post. Thanks! ;D
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Post by natalie on Nov 23, 2009 22:25:53 GMT -5
Your Welcome,
Great start
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Post by Amayasama on Nov 24, 2009 18:23:55 GMT -5
^0^ Ohhhh is she going to meet a god?
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Post by pr on Nov 24, 2009 19:44:02 GMT -5
I might not be able to get a post in tonight...i'll try...but i've got a huge project I need to finish before tomorrow ^.^; sorry
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Post by pr on Nov 26, 2009 17:15:20 GMT -5
(( Hi again! sorry I havent posted yet ^.^; heres mine, and heres what Rin looks like Rin- s.mynicespace.com/myspacepic/599/59916.jpg )) Rin sat against the hill next to the waterfall and ran his hand through the branches of a tree, making the greenest leaves grow from the branches. His small garden by waterfall was beautiful. There were so many different types of flowers and trees, some still un known to the humans. Sadly, he couldn't come here everyday. He always had buisness in different realms, taking time away from his small garden. But, when he was able to take time for it, he was happy. A garden was the perfect thing for a Earth God. Sure he wasn't as important as most gods, but he didn't mind. He loved making things grow, both the easy and hard way. He carefully laid his index and middle finger on the ground. Vines seem to wrap around the fingers and ever so slowly, he lifted his hand, and the vines wrapped around them selves and formed a small baby tree. With a smile, he yawned, laid against the rocks behind him and fell asleep.
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Post by Amayasama on Nov 26, 2009 21:15:29 GMT -5
((x3 Ohhh I'm curious! What kind of god is Rin? Can he control plants?))
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Post by bookworm101 on Nov 26, 2009 23:30:23 GMT -5
Great post, pr! Thanks for posting up Rin's picture, by the way. He looks hot.... Anyway, I like the detail in it. Very descriptive. Tee hee, I can't wait to see what happens next....oh wait, I'm one of the authors. I already know! Yes, Amaya, He is the god of Earth... and a hot one at that *swoons*
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Post by bookworm101 on Nov 28, 2009 13:29:41 GMT -5
Finally got around to posting this. Sorry it took so long.
After about two hours of reading, Olivia felt she could finally stop. She was extremely anxious to get to the waterfall. She hadn't been there all week and she was beginning to miss the place.
She grabbed her favorite backpack and stuffed it with some granola bars, war, some of her new books, a first-aid kit, her cell phone, and her journal and pen. She was all set to go.
Olivia pulled her favorite coat off of it's hanger and practically ran out the door. She knew the way to the waterfall by heart. The girl didn't even think about which way to go. She just simply enjoyed the passing sites she had seen so many times before.
After only fifteen minutes, she had finally arrived at her favorite place in the world. The magnificent waterfall. She set down her belongings and hopped into the warm water. Olivia couldn't care less if she got her clothes all wet, the water felt so good on her skin.
She swam over to her wall. The one that she absolutely adored to climb. It's pull was irresistible. It was hard to believe she had stayed away for this long. She gripped her hands onto the nearest rocks she could reach and pulled her body out of the water.
She swung her legs up under her and proceeded to climb. She knew the many twists and turns of the wall by now. She didn't even need to think about what she was doing. She was an expert.
She loved the feel of the rocks beneath her chest, the many shapes and forms of them. It was enticing. Unfortunately, her ride came to a stop when she reached the top of the wall. The ground rumbled beneath her.
What the heck could cause something like that? She thought to herself.
Olivia listened for the sound again. It came from beneath her. She cautiously looked down. Olivia couldn't believe what was sitting before her eyes.
It was a giant. An actual giant. He appeared to be sleeping. Olivia realized the vibrations she felt must've been him snoring
Good, she thought to herself, at least this way I can go home without being noticed,
She quietly climbed down the rock wall, jumping at every sound she heard. She was more on edge for these few minutes that she had been in her whole fourteen years. After agonizing minutes, she finally reached the bottom.
She took a closer look at the gargantuan visitor. He was pretty cute. He had earthy toned hair, shades of greens and browns all mixed together. He was rather muscular. If he were her size, she might even consider asking him out on a date.
Suddenly the snoring halted and the giant's eyes popped open. They were an unusual shade of purple.
Dang it, he's awake,Olivia thought, Well, maybe if I sneak away quietly, he won't see me.
No such luck. The tremendous purple eyes drifted their gaze and locked straight on her. Olivia had been spotted by the giant.
And there be this chapter. Review and I'll give you a cookie.....
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Post by Amayasama on Nov 28, 2009 15:35:27 GMT -5
((I rather like your carefree writing :3 Though you shouldn't rush the encounter and also you're controlling the other character, let it flow dear ^^))
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Post by natalie on Nov 28, 2009 20:22:07 GMT -5
I like all the details, I like your cliffhanger!! Great update!!
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Post by pr on Dec 5, 2009 17:40:32 GMT -5
((sorry for the lateness D:>))
Something was next to him. He could sense it. Slowly he opened his eyes and looked down only blink in surprise...
A human was staring up at him.
"...... AH!"
Rin screamed (so manly *rolls eyes*) and fell backwards, doing a roll and falling flat on his face. With groan he looked up to see the human still staring at him.
'She can't see me, man up Rin! Humans can't see gods....BUT WHY IS SHE STILL STARING AT ME?!?!'
He thought for a moment....
"Grr?"
((sorry its so short...can't do much TT.TT))
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Post by bookworm101 on Dec 5, 2009 18:41:21 GMT -5
Don't worry bout it. It was worth the wait.
Olivia had been caught by the giant.
She was waiting to be picked up, to be eaten. But, what happened next was something she never could've guessed.
He screamed. The giant actually screamed. If anything, she should be the one screaming, not him. What the heck could've scared him so much? SHE was the one face-to-face, well...sorta, with a giant.
The giant fell back wards and did a roll, making him fall flat on his face. Olivia was biting down on her lip to keep her laughter from coming out.
He's afraid of ME! She realized, This has got to be a first. A giant afraid of a human!
"Grr?" The giant said at last. He sounded as if he was trying to be scary. Olivia couldn't hold it back any longer. She burst out laughing. It made her fall straight on her face. She couldn't help it. He was so....cute, trying to act tough like that. She could feel the tears falling down her face. It was so funny.
Yep, that's all. Behold! Ze magnificent shortness!
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Post by pr on Dec 13, 2009 20:09:50 GMT -5
((again sorry for lateness!! Having a bit of a blockage....and bookworm....he might be hot...but he is a total spazz XD ))
Rin gapped at the laughing human in front of him. She COULD see him. "The hell? No way! Human's can't see me! Is my glamour on?" He checked himself. "It's on....BUT WHY ISN'T IT WORKING! GAH!!!"
It was natural. It was against the laws for a god to let a human see them. But....somehow this little one could see right through the glamour, which wasn't a very good thing. If the council found out, he could get in trouble or worse....take away his powers and.....well...destroy the human for they would see her as a 'threat'.
"Maybe I'm just imagining her...that's it! She's not there, It's all in my head." He tried laughing but it died when he looked down and she was still laughing.
He looked at her closely and said, "Are you sure your a human?"
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Post by bookworm101 on Dec 13, 2009 20:46:26 GMT -5
I don't care if he's a spazz....he's hot x3
Olivia could feel the giant looking at her strangely. She just didn't know why. And, she was laughing to hard to even bother to get a good look at him. He had been sitting up for a while now, but the image of him falling flat on his face still replayed in her brain.
Olivia even heard the giant laugh, which was impressive seeing as her own laughter was so loud. And the fact that she was gasping for breath. But, soon, his part died down.
Shame she thought, Wish he didn't stop. The dude's got a pretty nice laugh
The giant suddenly looked at her. She could feel his eyes boring a hole into her head. He finally spoke.
" Are you sure you're human?" The gargantuan man asked.
Huh. He's actually got a pretty nice voice
"Well, yeah!! Of course I'm human! What else would I be if I wasn't a human? A ghost? Vampire? No,no, a werewolf," Olivia responded back sharply and sarcastically. She hated being called weird. Even if that wasn't exactly what he had said, it was more than certainly implied.
Olivia already felt left out as it was. Everyone already thought she was weird and odd...and strange...and a freak. Now, she had this giant that she didn't even know call her one, too. She just couldn't catch a break today.
The awesome SHORTNESS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Post by pr on Dec 13, 2009 21:46:30 GMT -5
((bwahahaha double )) Rin looked at her confused. "Well no...you could also be a fairy, nymph, dyrad....though....i don't see any green on you...so thats ruled out...you could also be a mini goddess...." He tried to recall any other races he had left out. "But if you aren't any of them....how in Gaia's name can you see me? Human's can't see gods...unless you have some mystical creature blood in you...or my glamour isn't as strong as it used to be." Rin looked over the small human carefully and tried to figure out what she was....
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Post by bookworm101 on Dec 14, 2009 7:20:00 GMT -5
Woah! We be on a role with this. Four updates in not even two days.
"Well no...you could also be a fairy, nymph, dyrad....though....i don't see any green on you...so thats ruled out...you could also be a mini goddess...." He said in response.
A dyrad? Fairy? Nymph? These things seriously exist? He does know I was being sarcastic, right?
"But if you aren't any of them....how in Gaia's name can you see me? Human's can't see gods...unless you have some mystical creature blood in you...or my glamour isn't as strong as it used to be."
She normally would care at the fat that she was just proven wrong at the fact that she was weird. Apparently, Olivia wasn't supposed to be able too see him. But, only one word clicked in her mind.
"Holy fudge! You're a GOD!" She shouted the second he finished his sentence.
How could she not know about this? She's read almost every mythology book ever printed! And, yet, Olivia still didn't recognize him! How was that possible!
........I gots nothing to say..... EXCEPT the fact that I love the part where he says "How in Gaia's name can you see me". That's awesome, pr! Nice work....as usual!
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