emily13
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Post by emily13 on Apr 13, 2010 21:06:02 GMT -5
Liz: *foaming at mouth* If he wants to to keep the finger, he leaves me alone!!! >,.,<
Lliam: O.O" ......... *puts on protective gloves* ;D All ready lil' one!
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emily13
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Post by emily13 on Apr 13, 2010 21:26:31 GMT -5
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Post by Neon on Apr 13, 2010 23:20:58 GMT -5
Sounds like an interesting reaction will unfold ... but he is right, she oughtn't stress that injury too much.
*still cringing*
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Post by natalie on Apr 14, 2010 2:10:11 GMT -5
Great scenes, I like how you have the two interact, also. Awesome story!!
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Post by Satal on Apr 14, 2010 2:52:51 GMT -5
You have a very good story and an amazing picture! I aalmost envy you. XD
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Post by whisperer on Apr 15, 2010 22:30:05 GMT -5
Ah! Welcome to the boards, and thank you for the story! I'm really liking it so far, and can't wait for more.  |
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emily13
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Post by emily13 on Apr 16, 2010 19:05:33 GMT -5
Chapter 4  ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Liz screamed as soon as her mind registered what was going on. The higher up she got, the more it felt like she was going to puke. She closed her eyes so that she didn't have to see how far up she was; just from seeing him crouching she could tell he had to be BIG. She began to thrash about wildly, ignoring the pain in her shin. She wasn't going down without some kind of struggle, no matter how pointless it seemed. It had only been a couple seconds when the moving stopped and a warm, humid breeze washed over her.'Oh God...,' she thought without stopping her struggle, 'I'm right in front of his freaking mouth!!!' She slowly opened one eye and her stomach sank as she realized that she was only about 2 feet from his mouth. 'If this is how I'm going down,' she thought boldly (which even shocked her), 'I'll make him choke.' With that she began thrashing even harder. -------------------------------- Lliam panicked when the little girl started thrashing about wildly, which was probably the worst thing she could do for her leg besides run on it. He didn't want to hold her in his fist, because though it would stop her struggling, there was a risk that he could hurt her leg even more. He decided he would try and talk her into calming down. 'Yeah, 'cause that's worked so well for ya' so far,' he thought sarcastically. -------------------------------- A small hint of relief blossomed inside of Liz when the giant moved her up in front of nose and away from his mouth. She kept thrashing her arms though, no way was she letting down her guard! She quit her thrashing though when the giant started talking in a loud thundering voice She could still hear him when she stuck her fingers in her ears! "Miss please stop! You're only hurting yourself! I just want ta' he-" The giant stopped short as soon as Liz's boot made contact with his nose. "LIKE HELL YOU'RE GONNA HELP ME!!!" She screamed. She had reached her boiling point. She was sick of his 'I just want ta' help' routine. I f he was going to kill her, she'd rather he just get it over with. When the giant burst out laughing though, she regretted her actions. He was probably humored at her attempt because of how powerless she was compared to him. That kick couldn't have felt like more than a tap. She hung her head to hide her tears of embarrassment. This had to be the most Hellish night of her life. -------------------------------- Lliam couldn't help laughing. This girl was obviously scared of him, but the fact that she could kick him (though it had only felt like a mere poke to him) showed that she was a brave girl. She had a lot of spunk, and he liked that. Once he had stopped laughing and caught his breath, Lliam regained his serious composure and spoke to the girl. "Okay I know ya' don't trust me lil' one, but your leg really...wait, whoa, why are you crying now?!" --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Okay ran into a bit of a writer's block  but thought I'd post this at least. Poor Lliam ;D |
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Post by emily13 on Apr 16, 2010 21:24:35 GMT -5
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Post by Amayasama on Apr 16, 2010 22:11:27 GMT -5
Ah! I missed a chapter! XD Aw man x3 And thanks for the cookie hun ^3^ *nibbles on it* I have to say this Lliam sounds like one of my misbehaving giants XD I like him <3
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Post by emily13 on Apr 16, 2010 22:27:56 GMT -5
lol glad you like the cookie X3
And Lliam isn't so much misbehaving, more like socially awkward, but it still causes issues X}
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Post by Satal on Apr 17, 2010 16:16:30 GMT -5
Amaya: Like Amuyu? XD
Just keep thinking of ideas on how to keep going in my opinion. That is the only reason a good few of my stories live.
Edit: ask for help if you think you may need it too. People here are nice enough to point a few possibilities.
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Post by emily13 on Apr 17, 2010 17:24:08 GMT -5
Thanks for the tip, 'cause I've just hit a writers block ^^" does anyone have any ideas?  |
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Post by emily13 on Apr 17, 2010 19:04:26 GMT -5
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Post by Amayasama on Apr 17, 2010 19:30:52 GMT -5
XD HAha yes Satal, like my Amuyu. ;D As for Lliam, I'm sure he'll be fun in the long run. :3 Let's see...well it sounds like there is a whole other race or does he have a house in the woods? ^^ Or perhaps he goes in search of her car and helps fix it? XD I dunno, maybe he's good at car models or something *shruggies* I'm afraid I don't know enough about your thoughts on this story so I can't be much help...sorries ;3; *goes back to my cookie*
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Post by emily13 on Apr 17, 2010 19:37:56 GMT -5
lol well there IS a whole other race and his house is technically in the woods, but I'm not sure how he's going to get Liz to ever calm down enough for him to help her, I've made her the most stubborn thing on Earth!!! As for the idea of him fixing Killer...I LURVE IT!
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Post by Amayasama on Apr 17, 2010 21:34:47 GMT -5
Hm...maybe she begins to get a fever, she has been walking in the ran and is hurt so perhaps she's losing too much blood and faints? XD; Maybe that's how he could finally get near her. That way she won't be hurting herself or him XDDD
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Post by Satal on Apr 17, 2010 22:18:08 GMT -5
He can take the car back to his house to fix thus stranding her.
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Post by natalie on Apr 17, 2010 23:28:14 GMT -5
Great update!! Awesome story
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Post by emily13 on May 4, 2010 15:12:55 GMT -5
Finally! I've been home most of the day due to an injury i got in athletics, so I decided to breath some life back into my story ;D It's kinda short though  --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 5 Lliam’s mind flew into frenzy. What had he done now? He carefully lowered the girl back into his other hand and cupped his fingers so that she would not fall. She curled her good leg up to herself and continued to cry with her head hung. ‘God, I’m such a moron!!!’ Lliam thought to himself. He had a feeling that his laughter was what caused her to cry, though he couldn’t guess why. “ARRRRUGH!” he growled, more than frustrated with himself. ------------------------------- Liz let out a shriek when she heard the giant growl. She pushed herself back with her good leg until she ran into the barrier created by his fingers. Since she could no longer go anywhere, Liz sat trembling with tears still streaming down her face. ‘Maybe,’ she thought numbly, ‘he’s mad enough to finish me off, and stop tormenting me.’ ----------------------------- Lliam had closed his eyes in order to gather himself, but snapped them back open when he felt the small trembling girl press against his fingers. His heart nearly shattered when he saw the fearful look in her blue eyes. He brought his had closer to his chest and placed his free hand beneath it. “Please don’t be scared! I wasn’t growling at you! I would never do that! I’m so sorry!” ------------------------------- Liz could only stare blankly up at the rambling giant. She had no clue what he was saying, the words sounded like a bunch of gibberish. Her head was swimming and everything in sight became a mass of blurriness. The only thing she could see clearly was the blood pooling in the palm of the giant around her leg. She felt her trembling turn to swaying before slipping into black unconsciousness, her last thought being a prayer that the giant would leave her be and disappear before she awoke. That was, if she ever did wake up. --------------------------------- Lliam furrowed his eyebrows in confusion when he saw the girl slump back against his fingers, eyes closed tightly. ‘Did she fall asleep?’ he thought curiously. “Miss! Miss wake up! It’s not good to fall asleep with an injury like that,” Lliam stated softly. The girl didn’t respond though. He carefully nudged her with his index finger, only to have the color drain from his face when she flopped to the side like a rag doll. “Crap!” Lliam shouted, causing birds to flee in every direction. He brought the girl up closer to his face and was slightly relieved to see her small chest rise and fall shakily, ‘Thank God! She’s not…dead. At least not for now.’ He thought, somewhat relieved. Lliam cupped his hand around the small figure again and brought her close to his chest before starting off towards his home. He was coming up to the road when he spotted the girl’s truck. He began to worry about what would happen if someone were to find it. The image of hundreds of people in the woods with search dogs made him shudder. He crouched down, trying to be careful so he didn’t jostle the girl, and picked up the tiny automobile. Once he was standing at his full height again, he put the truck in one of the many pockets of his black cargo pants. ‘No harm done,’ he thought as he continued on his way, ‘besides, she might have something in there that she needs.’ With that he looked back down at the small being in his hand and couldn’t help the small smile that played on his lips. She was a lot less fierce looking when she was unconscious. Then, the image of her cold, gray, and unmoving passed through his mind, reminding him of the dire situation the girl was in. His face became serious and he quickened his pace, knowing that too much idling could bear serious consequences. He was going to help this girl, whether she liked it or not. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- As you can see, I used the ideas you guys so generously gave me! Thanks for the help!  |
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Post by whisperer on May 4, 2010 23:01:12 GMT -5
This just keeps getting sweeter! I wonder how Lliam is going to handle the situation at home.
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but thought I'd post this at least.
Tis Amaya from everywhere! *flails* x3 
