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Post by Neon on Jul 21, 2010 23:54:54 GMT -5
:3 Cute, cute! I like how you are paying close attention to the details of it to make it flow so well.
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Post by natalie on Aug 5, 2010 14:08:43 GMT -5
Great story!! I like it!!
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Post by Satal on Aug 17, 2010 8:34:30 GMT -5
Penemue shifted akwardly as he walked, not sure of his next move. He liked these humans, but did not want to take a risk by staying. He looked down at the children cupped gently in his hannd and almost tripped over his own two feet.
"Well," Lucia spoke breaking the akward silence, "What are we going to feed him?" The children fell silent, thinking.
"I do not eat human food," Penemue mused making the children perk back up.
"But do you want to stay?" Lucia asked the giant angel. Penemue turned his eyes upward, look past the clouds in thought. His wings flared breifly and he gave a shallow nod.
"Thank you Penny!" Diane whooped giving one of his fingers a tight squeeze. Penemue found himself chuckling dispite his nerves. He soon picked up his pace shaking the tiny humans he carried, their home was not too far. The children tumbling about in his grip made him more nervous than anything else. Their house rose a bit past his knees. He almost trampled the wooden stick fence to the ground, but swiftly stepped over it as soon as he saw it. He knelt slowly, his bones creeking in protest to the agonizingly slow movement. He allowed the children off first before offering his damp palm to Lucia. Seeing the shine of sweat, he quickly wiped it on his tunic before retrying his offer. With a light giggle, Lucia slipped tenderly into his palm. He brought her to join her siblings on the ground. As soon as the humans were safe off his person, Penemue rose, stepped back, and collasped to the ground as if burnt out. All three humans gave cries of shock as they fell to the ground due to the massive tremor the giant had created. Penemue apologized intensly as the kids rushed to play with his wings. They scampered up as far as they could on his flight feathers.
"Thank you Mr. Penemue," lucia called up to him, "We may not have much, bt is ours is yours."
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Post by Satal on Aug 18, 2010 1:05:35 GMT -5
That is all for that update.
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Post by Amayasama on Aug 18, 2010 15:49:21 GMT -5
XD Awww he's so nervous that his palms are sweating. x3 He's so adorable hun *hugs* I love your characters <3
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Post by Neon on Aug 24, 2010 22:55:29 GMT -5
For some reason, Mr. Penemue looks really cool written like that. XD Love it
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Post by Satal on Aug 25, 2010 17:14:02 GMT -5
"I have no need of anything as of now," Penemue boomed with a bow of his head, "but I thank you for the sentiment." He turned his attention to the children. Diane had gotten up his flight feathers and was trying to go higher.
"That hurts dear," Penemue gently scolded tangling the form of the tiny girl in his fingers. She giggled as she pushed vainly against the giant's flesh. Penemue set her near her brother, who was focused on a tall figure approaching the house.
"Mr. Gave!" Diane squealed rushing to meet him. Moses tugged on Penemue's draping fingers.
"Mr. Gave is nice. Please don't be scary and mad that he is here," begged the boy. Penemue smiled softly down at him.
"Now why would I do that?" he asked the boy, "If he is a friend of yours, then he is welcome to be a friend of mine." Moses glanced up at the giant with a smile bright enough to rivel the sun. Penemue felt his heart melt at the little red head's innocense.
"Oh my!" cried the new voice of the stranger, "Who and what have we got here?" Penemue looked at the man who stared intently up at him. Penemue stole a glance at the stranger and froze.
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Post by Amayasama on Aug 25, 2010 19:28:28 GMT -5
o.o Oh! Does he know this stranger? Is he an angel in disguise?!
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Post by Neon on Aug 26, 2010 0:41:13 GMT -5
o.o Oh! Does he know this stranger? Is he an angel in disguise?! I'm thinking along the same lines. OMG funfun!
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Post by manynames on Sept 3, 2010 0:52:33 GMT -5
Who is it?!? Dang you evil cliffhanger!!!
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Post by Satal on Sept 27, 2010 12:38:18 GMT -5
The man standing in Penemue's shadow was dressed sharply, his short blond hair peeking from under his top hat. His sharp commanding grey eyes bore holes into Penemue. He did not seem to pleased with Penemue being there, and the grigori knew why.
"Sir Gabe-!" Penemue began to say when the man's voice easily cut in.
"Gave. Nice to meet you Mr...?"
"P-Penemue," muttered the giant, his wings limp in sorrow.
"He's scared," Moses sighed letting Gave out of his arms and marching over to Penemue's massive hand. He patted the thick skin tenderly, but firmly so the giant could feel him. Penemue looked down at him and streached out his hand. Moses embraced his long pointer finger.
"Gave is nice. Don't be scared," Moses stated. Penemue smiled weakly.
"For you..." he rumbled.
"Thank you Mr. Gave!" Diane squealed. Gave was looping a ruby crested cross around her neck. Diane danced in place in joy.
"A birthday present for a beautiful lady," Gave chuckled. Penemue inwardly blanched. He forgot, human birthdays meant gifts. And he had nothing like the cross. Humans would call him poor. He scrambled one-handed through his cloths and pack finding nothing but ink, parchment, and words. Sighing, he felt his wings droup again, which gave him an idea.
"Excuse me Moses," he mutter taking back his right hand from Moses small arms. He ran his hand through his speckled wings and found a thick pre-flight feather full of body and his meager coloring. He ripped it free, blood misting as he did so. Wiping the quil on his pants quickly, he handed the still warm feather to Diane.
"For your birthday. If you need me, tell this feather and I will hear," Penemue stated blessing the feather. Diane took it in a daze before falling forward to hug Penemue's retreating fingers. Looking at Gave, Penemue knew he did something right due to the smallest of smiles playing on the man's lips.
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Post by Amayasama on Sept 27, 2010 15:38:08 GMT -5
x3 Aw how cute...>> Though I wonder how she'll hide that feather from her parents XD Still curious about Gave though! x3 <3
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