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Post by ezzabezza on Aug 29, 2010 16:39:19 GMT -5
Aww thanks Cookie! ;D ;D And as I said to Manynames she maaaay be scared
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Post by manynames on Aug 29, 2010 16:52:57 GMT -5
She's gonna freak out later then.
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Post by ezzabezza on Aug 30, 2010 3:33:39 GMT -5
Jackson's POV After about 1 hour or two of non-stop solid questions I opened my eye's and looked around. The park was really calming as if someone had but a spell around it to keep everyone happy and relaxed. I smiled as I watched a little kid play ball with a dog, throwing it in the air and skrieching with laughter when he caught it in his mouth. Also I saw about 10 girls all linned up in pink bikini's sunbathing on pink towels. I rolled his eyes at this because I never did understand why girls want to go out and burn thier skin (NO OFFENSE TO ANYONE) but hey, that's just me. Just as I was about to close my eye's agian (I didn't get much sleep due to my parents CONSTANT bickering) my phone rang. "Hello?" I said "Hi Jackson, it's Aiden, I heard the news and er... do ya wanna come over or something?" "Okay, thanks bye" "Bye" Aiden has been my best friend since we was 5, we'd just sit there for ages talking about music and....girls but anyway we've always stuck by each other and never let the other one down. As I was remembering when me and Aiden met I wasn't looking where I was going... Lorelei's POVMe and the spider spent about and hour and 30 minutes madly running around in circles until the spider tripped and fell to the ground. Because I was running so fast after him I didn't have any time to react resulting in me tripping over him and landing face first into the mud aswell! I sat up and wipped most of the mud off my face and laughed. When I saw the spider had hurt one of his many legs I wobbeled over to him and patted his furry head. "For some reason or other I think I'm going to call you Beep" I laughed. "Now c'mon beep I'll race ya over there!" I shouted dashing off into the distance with Beep close behind. The soft mud beneath us changed to huge pebbles but I was too focused to get to the middle of it to care. "Victorious!" I called, beating Beep within seconds. Suddenly the ground started to shake and heading straight for us was the biggest pair of nikes I ever did see! I tried to run but I had stepped in a big gloop of gum and was stuck where I was! Without a thought I grabbed the terrified Beep and crouched down, protecting him in case... I cant say it. Just as the trainers were hovering over me I screamed for the first time in my life and I screamed LOUD! _______________________________________________________________________________________ Is it me or are these chapters getting bigger each time?
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Post by natalie on Sept 1, 2010 0:24:08 GMT -5
Great chapter and cliffhanger!!
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Post by bookwormgrl101 on Sept 1, 2010 13:52:04 GMT -5
I loved it ezza!!!!!!! I love the cliffhanger best of all XD Can't wait for more!!
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Post by ezzabezza on Sept 1, 2010 17:25:24 GMT -5
Thanks Natalie and Cookie!!! ;D
Jacksons pov
So here I was. Thinking about how me and Aidan met when I was torn from my thoughts by a long, loud noise. It sounded like a scream, a female one, but it also sounded distant and quiet.
The scream made me jump and trip over my feet causing me to fall back wards onto the pavement! "Ow" I laid there for a second then laughed and sat up. What I saw crouched in front of me made my eye's bulge and my mouth to drop...
Lorelei's pov
My scream lasted for about 5 seconds hopefully long and loud enough for the 'shoe' to hear. Apparently so, the monster fell back about 60 feet and caused a earthquake as it landed!
I was tempted to scream again but I thought it might have been a bit too much! "Ow" 'It could speak English?! Wow!' I thought.
As it sat up my mouth dropped, so did it's! I studied it- I mean his appearance. Long, dark brown hair surrounded his well sculpted face and from what I could see a slim yet firm body followed on.
We sat there for what seemed like hours! gaping at each other. Until I slowly, veeery slowly stood up. still not releasing my death grip on beep who's eight eye's were just as big as the 'creature'.
Heck, if he wasn't as big as he was I'd probably believe he was one of us humans!
Jackson's pov I took this time to my advantage and looked this girl over. She had wild red hair and a cheeky look to her but there was something else, something deep, deep down inside her that she had seen or been through. I wondered what it was?
Just as I was about to say something she bolted off down the pavement tightly pressing her little spider friend into her chest. "Hey wait!" It was only human nature to chase after her. But why did I?
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Post by natalie on Sept 1, 2010 21:01:26 GMT -5
Another great update
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Post by ezzabezza on Sept 2, 2010 13:33:21 GMT -5
Thanks Natalie! Stupid writers block
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Post by natalie on Sept 2, 2010 19:38:36 GMT -5
Your Welcome!! Yeah, writers block can be frustrating.
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Post by bookwormgrl101 on Sept 4, 2010 11:04:37 GMT -5
I agree with natalie. I hate, hate, hate writer's block... grrr.... XD but, i love the update!! can't wait to see what happens next!!
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Post by ezzabezza on Sept 6, 2010 10:57:05 GMT -5
Aww thankyou Cookie! Ecstatic to know some people like my story! ;D ;D
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Post by manynames on Sept 6, 2010 12:20:25 GMT -5
So wait what happens next in the story?
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Post by ezzabezza on Sept 6, 2010 15:07:48 GMT -5
To be honest i'm not sure myself!
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Post by bookwormgrl101 on Sept 6, 2010 15:56:50 GMT -5
Aw *pouts* Curse you writer's block!! XD Well, this is just an idea, but Jackson catches her and then she bites him... which get him mad....... idk, I'm just kinda thinking of random stuff ^^
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Post by ezzabezza on Sept 7, 2010 1:53:20 GMT -5
Ok good idea! Do you mind if I use that? ;D
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Post by bookwormgrl101 on Sept 8, 2010 15:34:27 GMT -5
Thanks Sure, go ahead
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Post by ezzabezza on Sept 11, 2010 14:57:23 GMT -5
I'm so sorry for making you guys wait so long for this! I did do a really long chapter but just as i was about to post it the web page expired and i lost all of it! so anyway i'll try to remember most of it but there's only so much you can remember! _________________________________________________________________________ Lorelei's pov Geeze, he was fast! With every step he took caused an eathquake for me! I hugged beep tightly. His eye's were searching around for any sign of escape, so where mine! Looking around frantically I picked up my pace 'C'mon!' I thought 'I need an id-' suddenly I had an idea. Beep was a spider right? And spiders spun webs? If I could cause Beep to fire some of his webby...stuff, onto that branch We could swing up onto it and be safe from the beast behind me! Genius! "Im sorry Beep!" I whispeared into what I though was his ear. His eye's quickly snapped onto me but widened as I squeezed him tightly. Sure enough, out shot his web and looped around the huge piece of bark. The ground quickly left my feet and I was briefly gaining altitude. Unfortunately, like many other them, my plan seemed to backfire and instead of landing onto the branch we seemed to go over it! I was close to screaming agian, a genuin scream this time. I closed my eye's and waited for death... Jackson's pov. I chased her for about half an hour, eyeing her every move until I saw her beautifly sculpted features light up 'uh oh' I thought. I watched intently as she press hard onto the tiny spider in her arms and quickly lifted off the ground. My eye's widdened as she landed on the branch. Well, I thought she had landed until her tiny body started to loose altitude. Time seemed to slow down. My heart skipped a beat... Without thinking, my hands shot up and caught the two starteld creatures... Lorelei's POVAnger, fear, sorrow, happiness, thousands of emotions were pulsing through my body all at once. I hugged Beep tighter, i wouldn't have been suprised if I had suffercated him by now! Waiting for my time to be up. Luckily, my gaurdian angle was looking out for me today and instead of hitting the solid pavement I landed on a soft springy surface. However, I refused to open my eye's. It took alot of will power but eventually I managed to part my eyelids. To my horror I was actually in the beasts hands! I started to panic. 'Come on Lorie' I cooed in my head 'just do what you feel is wright and everything will be okay'. Without thinking, I lept over to the closest finger to me and sank my teeth into it. It was when I tasted the coppery taste of blood that I started thinking about what I was doing. 'IDIOT!' my mind screamed 'what have you done??'
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Post by bookwormgrl101 on Sept 14, 2010 15:34:49 GMT -5
yeah!! you used my idea I'm so happy anyhowwwwwwwwwwwwww.......... I LOVES IT!! (like always XD) i can't wait to see what jackson's gonna do......... my tummy butterflies are fluttering about just thinking about it (Wow, was that phrased weird or what?)!! *waits anxiously at computer*
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Post by ezzabezza on Sept 15, 2010 10:42:30 GMT -5
Thanksyou so much!! ;D ;D ;D
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Post by bookwormgrl101 on Sept 18, 2010 11:16:30 GMT -5
ur so welcome any time you get stuck, i'll help out if i can
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