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Post by MoonStarNinja4 on Feb 4, 2011 17:42:17 GMT -5
I remember reading this on SM. I really liked it!
If you break through that writers block, I'll hope you continue it.
I haven't read this since you stopped wirting, so I guess I can re-read this again. ^_^
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Post by Amayasama on Feb 4, 2011 20:25:25 GMT -5
^^ Oh interesting XD Haha this main character seems cocky ;3 I wonder how she'll react to our giant here
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Post by biali on Feb 5, 2011 4:33:03 GMT -5
Great ^^ I already liked to read this on shrinkingman. Good luck in overcoming your writers block, because I really loved where this story was going ^^
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Post by boo on Feb 10, 2011 21:17:18 GMT -5
I'm liking their encounter, its fun. ^^
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Post by kimgreenday on May 1, 2011 19:32:47 GMT -5
Okay, so I'm totally taking apart this story and rewriting it. Why? Because I was reading over it these last few days, and I was literally cringing at how . . . well . . . bad my writing skills used to be. ^^; (I began writing this story over a year ago.) I've already rewritten and edited the first five chapters, and I'm currently working on the rest.
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Post by Amayasama on May 1, 2011 20:21:06 GMT -5
^^ Okay hon, all the luck to you then! Have you posted those above? I noticed the last edit says "today" and I'm curious to see how much you have developed ^w^
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Post by DJ yellow ;) on May 1, 2011 20:28:43 GMT -5
Ah, a good rewrite Kimmy ^^ Though, the story was already enjoyable before, now it's better ^^
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Post by Amayasama on May 2, 2011 15:40:10 GMT -5
^^ I see your writing has gotten much better dear, I'm proud to see that! x3 And I have to say this story has come a long way as well, even though I'm sad for Ziada (I believe? Forgive me if I'm wrong) D: She's gotten with a jerk and if she only hid for a while longer she would have been found by the other giant!
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Post by natalie on May 2, 2011 16:22:42 GMT -5
I think your writing has gotten better too. Great story, I feel sorry for Ziada. Please continue when you have time.
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Post by kimgreenday on May 2, 2011 19:30:39 GMT -5
Amayasama: Thankies! This was the first story I ever wrote, and it's realy fun to edit and make better ^-^ Her name is "Ziana", but that's all right, considering the story is 1st person and her name doesn't pop up much, lol! @dj: Thanks, buddyyyy! XD natalie: Thank you!!
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Post by DJ yellow ;) on May 2, 2011 19:36:12 GMT -5
WAIT YOUR CONTINUING THIS ALREADY
SWEEEEET
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Post by natalie on May 2, 2011 22:44:48 GMT -5
Awesome update!!
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Post by Amayasama on May 4, 2011 15:33:24 GMT -5
 Gasp! I see you gave this part a major make-over ^0^ I'm so proud! x3 You are going well my dear, and I'm happy to see you going back to fix it x.x I have to tell you that I don't have the guts to go and fix MY older stories XD |
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Post by Natsuno on May 8, 2011 16:32:55 GMT -5
Poor Ziana!  ( Also,Kim i sent you a pm,please read it. |
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Post by Amayasama on May 8, 2011 18:39:02 GMT -5
D: Oh noes...I hope he misses and she can bolt....
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Post by DJ yellow ;) on May 8, 2011 18:42:17 GMT -5
D:
I feel... So sad ;(
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Post by DJ yellow ;) on May 21, 2011 15:01:20 GMT -5
Lovely again ^^ Let's just hope she found a better giant this time,  |
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Post by natalie on May 21, 2011 22:38:33 GMT -5
Great job!! I agree with DJ yellow, lets hope she found a better giant this time :>
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Post by DJ yellow ;) on May 22, 2011 12:48:10 GMT -5
Wow, another one, already  Cool! Look, Nick's a emo, as Rodney describes it, so I like him, just cause |
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Post by Amayasama on May 22, 2011 19:38:52 GMT -5
D: Aw she's so terrified...I don't blame her though, thankfully she's in much better hands now but Nick has his work cut out for him x.x
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Tis Amaya from everywhere! *flails* x3 
( Also,Kim i sent you a pm,please read it.
Cool!