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Post by Deleted on Jul 1, 2009 22:34:45 GMT -5
Ah!? IS IT ARROW?! TELL ME IT'S ARROW?! I FLIPPING LOVE HIM!! XD
Ah~! So many updates in such a short span of time. YAY
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Post by valendil on Jul 2, 2009 2:01:19 GMT -5
Pocket lint lol. Would never want that to happen. Dx Good update. Anyways. CAN NOT WAIT FOR NEXT PART. *rolls with silent laughter for what is to come*
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Post by Satal on Jul 2, 2009 9:12:43 GMT -5
Ah!? IS IT ARROW?! TELL ME IT'S ARROW?! I FLIPPING LOVE HIM!! XD Ah~! So many updates in such a short span of time. YAY It is cause this thing has already been written once so I have a really good idea how it is going to go. And as for Arrow.... It might be. <___<
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Post by Deleted on Jul 2, 2009 23:48:45 GMT -5
Ah!? IS IT ARROW?! TELL ME IT'S ARROW?! I FLIPPING LOVE HIM!! XD Ah~! So many updates in such a short span of time. YAY It is cause this thing has already been written once so I have a really good idea how it is going to go. And as for Arrow.... It might be. <___< I'm sorry. I should do a better job restraining *some* of my excitement. haha ^////^;;
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Post by Satal on Jul 6, 2009 10:00:29 GMT -5
Naw Chibi, you are all right. xD
Update soonish? Dx Hopefully today.
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Post by Satal on Jul 6, 2009 22:59:17 GMT -5
The flash was really a red, curly ponytail as the new giant's face swam sickeningly into my view. His bright electric blue eyes peered down at me with interest. His smile was huge, being that close. But the oddest thing about this newcomer were the dark blue star tattoos covering his cheeks.
"Where did you?" Keelan yelped instinctively pulling my away from him.
"There is only one enterence silly," the other chirped in reply running a hand through his hair, "So, you are Miss Amy! You and Gillian had Catra worried. He is waiting for you. Come! Come!" He waved his hand beckoning Keelan to follow. Keelan held his ground.
"I'm not going to the kitchens," Keelan bluntly stated. The red-head raised a questioning eyebrow.
"And where would you be going?" he asked.
"The baths, this thing smells horrible," Keelan grunted making a face. The other giant exploded into thundering laughter.
"I've never seen you care about such trivial things Keelan!" he chuckled clapping Keelan on the back. The strangth behind that simple movement could have toppled an elephantin an instant.
"Watch what you are doing Arrow!" snapped Keelan. Arrow pushed out his lower lip.
"I am," he protested. He got closer to me again, but this time, swooping down from Keelan's shoulder.
"You are cute!" Arrow exclaimed. Keelan shrugged him off and marched out of the room.
"Keelan!" Catra shouted as he shoved past Gill, "You both scared me to death! Amy! Did they hurt you? Did they scare you?" He teary eyes were extreamly close to me now.
"N-no. Keelan was just talking to me," I nervously replied.
"She speaks!" Arrow gasped recieving a sharp nudge from Gill. Keelan crinkled his nose.
"You smell horrible too!" he snorted, "Both of you need baths!" He strode past Catra and down the hall. Catra emitted a whimper and followed Keelan's rapid pace at Arrow's gentle pushing. Gill brought up the rear.
We turned down another white stone hall and then to a more shadow-toned hall. Steam drifted out from under a lightly colored wooden door. Arrow moved to open the door.
The baths were absolutly huge! It was the size of a lake to me, a swimming pool to them. Dusky marble lined the floor and the stair that led into the heated water. The room was dimly lit, red candles scattered all about. Gill walked to a deep red-wood closet and pulled out two crystal bottles, a dark magenta one and an almost clear turquoise one. As he passed, the strong scent of rose and meadow rain wafted out from the open bottles. He walked to the waterfall nestled in the curve of the bath and poured a bit of both liquids in it. Suds showered down from the built-in ornament.
"It is powered by a watermill under this place," Keelan stated. I saw Catra peel off his dirt-stained shirt from the corner of my eye. His hairless chest heaved with breath. Gill was taking off his boots and Arrow was removing his apron. Keelan knlet to allow me to dismount.
"Please don't think of running. I will catch you," he threatened.
"Where would I go? Huh... OH MY!" I yelped, flushing a beet red. Gillian was working on slipping out of his pants and it looked as if he wasn't wearing much under them. Arrow was already tenderly slipping into the heated water.
"What is wrong?" Keelan asked, his voice very close to my back. I peeked through my hands and saw that all he had left was his undone tunic. I quickly covered my eyes again. My stomach butterflies went haywire, like a three-year-old on black coffee.
"You're not dressed!" I scolded.
"Well, you need to undress to take a bath," Keelan stated matter-of-factly. I heard the rustle of fabric meaning he was now naked. I felt a tug on my flame-patteren pj bottoms.
"Keelan!" I squeaked lowering my hands to grabmy pants. But upon doing that, I saw him crouching there with absolutly no cloths. Screaming, I covered my eyes and he suceeded in getting my pants to my ankles. Someone came in, by the sound of heels suddenly on the stone, deposited something in the creaky closet and left.
"Amy,come on. Don't be so stubborn," Keelan sighed, "Look, I covered myself." I looked, and all the stupid brute had was a small towel covering what needed to be covered and nothing more.
"Not compleatly better," I growled through gritted teeth.
"She is too cute! It is almost like she has never seen a man before!" Arrow squeed.
"I haven't!" I retorted.
"Keelan, stop scarring the poor girl," Gill sighed from the bath.
Keelan snorted and scooped me up. He let the towl drop as he stood and walked to the bath, me protesting the whole way into the soapy water and the steamy men.
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Post by natalie on Jul 6, 2009 23:03:53 GMT -5
What an embarassing moment!! Yikes!! Awesome update!!
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Post by LightHeart on Jul 6, 2009 23:09:29 GMT -5
Oh goodness me!! *faints*
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Post by Fang on Jul 7, 2009 0:45:15 GMT -5
o///////////O
BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! XD LMAO!!!! OMG!!!!! That's hilarious!
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Post by nocturnalbirdie on Jul 7, 2009 2:36:56 GMT -5
...^///////////////^ .....wow..if i was in Amy's place..i dont know if id die of shock..or stare at the giant abs..>XDD ..lol.....im really liking this version and im lovin this update..^_^
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Post by masquerade on Jul 7, 2009 5:22:28 GMT -5
Oh goodness me!! *faints* you okay? *pokes with stick*
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Post by giantblackcat on Jul 7, 2009 6:58:28 GMT -5
Weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! 8DDD!!
*I go in the bath with a bikini*
-w-!!
A very, very good update!!
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Post by Satal on Jul 7, 2009 8:38:23 GMT -5
Glad everyone was ok with that part. xD I was freaking out that the bath scene was not what some would call clean. I called phantom-hotshot and everything. xD The scene was not finished and I hope to finish it today, maybe with an After Dark update. Might.... @birdie: It WAS the abs! I swear! LightHeart: You ok? *pokepoke*
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Post by Fang on Jul 7, 2009 9:47:14 GMT -5
Holy schnikes...hell yes...O____O Giant abs......meh, anybody have a napkin? >_> I'm starting to drool here....
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Post by LightHeart on Jul 7, 2009 12:01:30 GMT -5
O///////O *faints again*
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Post by Stray on Jul 7, 2009 12:28:42 GMT -5
*is on the verge of a nosebleed*
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Post by giantblackcat on Jul 7, 2009 15:02:20 GMT -5
Holy schnikes...hell yes...O____O Giant abs......meh, anybody have a napkin? >_> I'm starting to drool here.... XDXDXDXDXDD
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Post by giantblackcat on Jul 7, 2009 15:03:12 GMT -5
*is on the verge of a nosebleed* *nosebleeding*
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Post by Amayasama on Jul 7, 2009 21:48:20 GMT -5
XD Dude who would FIGHT getting into a tub full of hot men? >D *flails* ^0^ MY TWO MEN! ARROW AND GILL! *flails and runs full tilt to the water* *dives in* <333333333
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Post by nocturnalbirdie on Jul 8, 2009 1:49:01 GMT -5
Holy schnikes...hell yes...O____O Giant abs......meh, anybody have a napkin? >_> I'm starting to drool here.... *hands her a clean one and grabs another for herself*.....meh...i feel like i should have popcorn for this show........>;3
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