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Post by Amayasama on Jul 7, 2009 15:58:32 GMT -5
x3 Oh dear Maxie just needs a big hug ;D <3
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Post by LightHeart on Jul 9, 2009 18:02:46 GMT -5
Update soon! Hopefully a long one...
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Post by LightHeart on Jul 9, 2009 20:57:05 GMT -5
Chapter 5- Home sweet...Tag?
After Maxie's outburst,(Which lasted a good two hours) We were shone to our new "home". It was a house on the outskirts of the city. Of course it was build at a scale to find Maxie comfortably, but he didn't seem to pleased.The house was something like a Victorian cottage mixed with ancient Greek architecture, similar to our home back in the 50s. The color of the titanic house was a creme-colored yellow with with white pillar like structures supporting the
Momo remained with us during the whole ordeal; I couldn't help but wonder if she had a crush on my brother. I quickly forgot about what I was thinking when one of Maxie's titanic fingers. He told me that I had zoned out through the tour of the house. I gaped at him.
"There was a tour?!?!"
"Yes...You must have been in deep though."
I nodded; indeed I was. I observed the room nothing but a simple living room (( She being modest, It's like a Five-star hotel lounge! lol))...ignoring the fact that everything was of 40x my size.
"Well, this is..."
"Lame?"
"No,no...nice."
Maxie rolled his eyes, "The only reason this place is like the Ritz is so that I won't destroy the city. Not like I would, it's not worth it."
Maxie did have a point and--wait! Where's Momo? I knew Momo wouldn't just sit down and listen to us talk.
"Maximum, Where's the girl that was with me?!" I shouted up at him, worried for Momo's safety.
Maxie sat down on one of the many couches in the living room, "Momoko? She's exploring the house." My eyes bulged from my head. "ALONE?!?! WE'VE GOT TO FIND HER!!" I jumped for the high perch of my brother's hand and landed unharmed on the floor and ran blindly in to the bowels of the house.
I wishes that I paid attention to the tour because I had no idea where I was going. I huffed called out to Momo. No answer. I curse under my breath and sat in the middle of the corridor.
"Momo...Where are you?" I whispered.
"Here!" chimed Momo's voice.
I could have sworn that I jumped out of my skin. As I gather my wits, Momo tapped me on my shoulder.
"Tag! You're it!" She squealed and ran away. I huffed again, muttering that I was too old for this.
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Post by natalie on Jul 9, 2009 23:50:00 GMT -5
LOL, I like the ending :> Great update!! Like thet chapter title!!
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Post by giantblackcat on Jul 10, 2009 8:03:33 GMT -5
Hahaha!! XD! Sweet!
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Post by Amayasama on Jul 10, 2009 12:56:37 GMT -5
XD Seriously does this girl ever sleep?! *flails*
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Post by LightHeart on Jul 10, 2009 13:05:40 GMT -5
No.
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Post by giantblackcat on Jul 10, 2009 14:27:20 GMT -5
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Post by crystalrose557 on Jul 17, 2009 19:51:50 GMT -5
sweet, tag!!!! The game of all times great update
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Post by LightHeart on Jul 23, 2009 21:26:22 GMT -5
Chapter 6- Not Again
After hours of chasing Momo, I finally go the time to relax. I laid on Maxie's thigh listening to Momo chatter away at him.
"So, Mr. Giant, what's yer name?" asked Momo with a hint of flirtation. She really did like him.
"Maximum." he grunted back. I could see that he was tring hard to push her away.
Momo nodded, "Heheh, That's a fitting name for you, Maximum!" She tittered and laughed about.
"Yeeeeeaaaaaah..." he mumbled sarcastically. He was uncomfortable with Momo being so close to him.
"So...Do you have a girlfriend?" asked Momo nonchalantly.
I fell off of his thigh and on to the seat cushion. Girlfriend?!?! Maxie's face couldn't be pinker. Embarrassment and shyness were scrawled on his poor face. He tried to talk,but when he opened his mouth....nothing came. This was the first time I'd seen Maxie like this.
I turned to Momo; her grin was a mile wide. If only she knew what she'd just done. This was certainly an awkward moment.
"Um...Shouldn't you be getting home now, Momoko?...I'd hate for you to miss dinner." He manage to squeak,but I had to admit that it was a good save.
"Ohmigosh! You're so-so-so right! Well see you to tomorrow! Quack ya later!" Momo said as Maxie quickly took her to the door.
Maxie collapsed right in front of the sofa, his heart hammering in his chest. "I'm too old for this!!!!" he moaned. I giggled a bit; I knew it wasn't right but...It was so gosh-darn funny. Maxie's looked up at me with slight irradiation which silenced me completely.
"You're still afraid of me." It wasn't a question...It was a statement.
"Yes...I am." I said bluntly. My fear had subsided but it hadn't disappeared. You'd probably do the same of you saw you giant older brother commit a mass murder.
His eyes glazed over,"Good night, Sweetie." he murmured as he stood up and left for him room.
I watched as he left,feeling sad and guilty. I slept on the couch that night...that's when the nightmare started again.
The sky was a fiery shade of scarlet and flames engulfed the gleaming buildings. What was one a beauiful shining city was now a war wasteland. Everything was distorted and ugly like something out of a horror film. Blood stained the streets and bodies lay on the ground.
'Who could have done this?!' I thought...Then a shadow surrounded me...
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Post by natalie on Jul 23, 2009 21:38:08 GMT -5
Really intense cliffhanger. Another super update!!
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Post by giantblackcat on Jul 24, 2009 0:44:26 GMT -5
O.o!!!
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Post by Amayasama on Jul 24, 2009 12:01:40 GMT -5
;^; Oh Maxie you need to be cuddley to show her she won't get hurt!
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Post by LightHeart on Jul 24, 2009 16:51:19 GMT -5
he sure does! u.u
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Post by crystalrose557 on Jul 26, 2009 12:30:45 GMT -5
Darn! foiled by dinner time curse you dinner! and all of your leftovers! Great update with unexpecting turns
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Post by LightHeart on Sept 2, 2009 21:34:40 GMT -5
((Prepare for the most epic shortness and grammer misspellings in the history of this site.... MWE HEE HEE HEE))
Ch. 6-b Dreams are Dangerous
I turned to see my brother...or what the monster inside of him was using. All I could see was the rage-fulled,blood-lusting red-eyed giant. His Smile was wicked and deranged,and blood covered him from head to toe. I merely stood helpless before him,awaiting his wrath to fall upon me.
Those angry giant rubies fell on to me; my eye widened with fear.
"Do you like the makeover I gave this pathetic city, my dear sweet sister?" he said in an almost mocking tone. I couldn't even open my mouth.
His sickening grin grew," I knew you would...," Then he held up something...A person...who looked like a lotica doll...
"No...It can't be!!!" I breathed.
He laughed, "But it is,my sweet sister! IT IS!!!!!"
I woke up with sweat streaming down my face.
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Post by natalie on Sept 2, 2009 22:00:34 GMT -5
Whoa, what nightmare, intense update!! Keep up the good work!! (waves) Poor Min!!
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Post by giantblackcat on Sept 3, 2009 7:01:42 GMT -5
O.o!!
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Post by Amayasama on Sept 3, 2009 16:09:42 GMT -5
;^; Ohhhhh...I wish she could get used to her brother. At least now he's stopped growing...right?
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Post by crystalrose557 on Sept 6, 2009 16:57:44 GMT -5
.... well that's one way to put me to sleep great update
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