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Post by bookworm101 on Nov 14, 2009 21:59:44 GMT -5
I'm sorry to here you were sick. Hope you're feeling better now, hon. I really like this story! It's one of my favs and like the way that it's going, too! Hope you can post more soon!
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Post by Bloodcore on Nov 14, 2009 22:04:25 GMT -5
Thanks a lot! I like your story too! Yeah, I'm getting better. I had a fever and chills but now I'm just coughing a lot.
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Post by bookworm101 on Nov 14, 2009 22:12:05 GMT -5
I'm glad you like my story! It means a lot to me! Coughing isn't exactly a good thing but it sounds like a major improvement frm what you did have. I just got over a sore throat- nothing major- so I know ( actually, I think everyone here does) that it's not fun being sick.
Anywho... I hope you get COMPLETELY better soon!
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Post by Bloodcore on Nov 21, 2009 13:40:30 GMT -5
*Next part*
Nick walking into the kitchen, all the while glaring at me. He obviously hated me, though I didn't know why. I couldn't really do anything, so I just glared back. I could feel Joe's heart rate increase through the muscles in his hand. He must have gotten ready to defend me if Nick attacked me again. Instead of attacking me, Nick simply got a plate and piled food onto it for himself. Joe smiled and glanced down at me while he said, "Well, are you going to eat something?"
"Yeah, let's do it!" I replied. I was so fricking hungry. Saliva started to pool in my mouth and was threatening to spill over. Joe obviously saw this and said,
"You're a really classy gal Anna...Kevin, if you wouldn't mind, could you fix some food up for us please?"
"Yeah, of course." Joe set me on the kitchen table where Nick was (Bad choice, Joe) while Kevin bent down to see me eye-to-eye.
"What would you like, sweetie?" I cringed when he called me 'sweetie'. I hated being called 'cute', 'sweetie' or anything else.
"Well, for you not to call me sweetie, that's for one. I'll just take some bacon." I said. Kevin just chuckled.
"Even judging from our previous encounter, I can tell you're one feisty cutie." That's it, big boy! I plastered on my best fake smile and hissed,
"You call me any of those cute names again and I'll fucking slit your throat while you sleep." Awkward silence...Whoops...
So I finally got my bacon and was sitting on the table right next to Joe. I couldn't help but notice Nick was glaring at me all the way through breakfast. I had to find out what he hated about me. I put down the large bacon I was gnawing on and looked directly at him.
"What the hell is your problem with me? Answer me." I yelled up at him. I was suddenly grabbed and started to rise higher. I stopped right before Nicks' colossal face. His lips stretched back in a grin, revealing car door sized, white teeth. I felt sickened as moist, hot breath flowed over me.
"Why I hate you...Your pure existence bugs the hell out of me, but the main reason is that you could just ruin the family bond Joe, Kevin and I have going for us." That was the reason he hates me? He feels threatened by me? Talk about a role reversal. I then saw his eyes light up. It seems he developed an idea.
"I could just eat you and be done with it." Nick raised me over his now open maw. Luckily, Joe grabbed me straight out of his hands while Kevin restrained Nick. I was shaking horribly. THAT WAS SO NOT THE WAY I HOPED TO DIE!! Joe held me close to his chest and started to stroke my hair and back delicately with his fingertips. Both my heart and his were beating very fast. Seemed he was terribly scared too.
*Comments are appreciated."
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Post by natalie on Nov 21, 2009 18:32:36 GMT -5
Glad Joe saved her. Bad Nick!! Whoa, close call.
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Post by Bloodcore on Nov 21, 2009 20:35:50 GMT -5
Yeah it was!
Nick: I was gonna do it too...
Me/Anna: Yeah, sure you would have...
Nick: YOU DOUBTING ME BUG?!
Me/Anna: Run Away!
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Post by Bloodcore on Dec 3, 2009 23:52:07 GMT -5
I am soooooo freaking sorry I haven't written anything in a while! School's been really busy! I'll update as soon as I can! I'M SORRY!!
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Post by Bloodcore on Dec 5, 2009 23:26:32 GMT -5
*Next part. So sorry it took so long!*
"Nick! What the fuck is wrong with you?!" Joe shouted at Nick. I had just escaped being eaten by a walking skyscraper. I may have not gotten much schooling, but even I know how horrible a death like that would be. Being dissolved in a stomach?! Good god! I looked up at Joe and began shaking again. What if he or Kevin kills me by mistake? Accidentally eat me or crush me? Tears threatened to spill over as I started to hyperventilate. Joe noticed my gasps and said,
"Shit...Kevin, take Anna in another room. I'll deal with Nick." Kevin tried to take me but he had to pry my tiny fingers from Joes shirt.
"Anna...It's ok. Joe's going to deal with him. Please let go." He cooed. I shook my head no while saying,
"No...Can't leave him...Die..." Kevin sighed.
"Let go. NOW." He used a sharp tone this time. I flinched and slowly loosened my grasp. Kevin gently took me in his cupped hands, turned, and walked out of the kitchen. Before we left, I heard,
"You touch her again, and I'll beat the SHIT out of you, Nick!"
Kevin let me down on the bed in his room and sat down next to me. I glanced up at him. His hips rose above me like cliffs. Couldn't help but feel insignificant...Even as I am now... Why did I seem so weak out there? What's the reason?
"...Because you told him..." Dammit. Alice, go away. I don't need you right now.
"He really cares about you, you know." I jerked my head up at the silence-cutting voice emanating from Kevins' throat.
"I see." I mumbled.
"As do I."............WHAT?
*Comments make me smile!*
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Post by natalie on Dec 5, 2009 23:53:16 GMT -5
Really great built up to the square off between Joe and Nick, I like the part where Kevin' lips seem like cliffs. Good neat comparison. Great update.
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Post by Bloodcore on Dec 6, 2009 0:20:52 GMT -5
Lips..? You mean hips? Thanks a lot!!
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Post by natalie on Dec 6, 2009 1:04:09 GMT -5
Lips..? You mean hips? Thanks a lot!! Whoops, Yeah, I mean hips, Your Welcome!!
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Post by Bloodcore on Dec 12, 2009 23:30:26 GMT -5
*Next Part, might be short, I'm in a hurry. Comments make me smile!*
Kevin started shifting towards me, looking at me with a devious look in his eyes. I also started to move, away from him that is.
"You're cute, you have a great personality. How about you be mine?" Kevin said lustfully. I started to sweat heavily. Oh Hell, is he going to try what I think he's going to try? I hoped not. His hand shot out and grabbed me. He lifted me to his mouth, which stretched back into a toothy smile.
"You ever had a french kiss? I doubt it would work with us but let's try this." With those words, Kevin's pink tongue slithered out and slammed into my face. OH MY GOD!! I was so disgusted. I started to retch. My mind started to race, thinking of ideas to escape my current situation. Chance of escape? About 10% Not even going to take it, I know I won't make it. I shook my head violently to rid myself of the stringy saliva. When I got most of it off, I shouted up,
"H-Hey, let's n-not be so hasty...Ahehehe...Uhhh...You most likely have a girlfriend anyway, a handsome guy like you..." I thought that flattery might work in this crazy situation. Kevin grinned,
"Actually, I'm engaged. But she doesn't have to know about you." I was shaking. Ok, time for my wrath.
"HEY, THERE IS NO WAY ANYTHING CAN WORK OUT BETWEEN US!! LOOK AT ME AND LOOK AT YOU!!"........My 'wrath'? Great going Anna. I cursed myself for my sudden lack of insults. Kevin glared down at me. The air around me seemed to shake when he spoke in a deep voice.
"You know, I tried to get you to be with me, where you could have a good life, but no....You have to reject me, well no one rejects me!" He dropped me on the bed and I thought that was the end of it.
But nope. Kevin took his pointer finger, curled it around the neck hole of my shirt and tore it right off. What the fuck just happened? I sat there with no shirt on. Then it dawned on me.
"OH SHIT!! YOU'RE TRYING TO-!!"
"Somehow rape you, yes." Fuck, FUCK!! I had to go. NOW!
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Post by natalie on Dec 13, 2009 3:52:51 GMT -5
(Ewww, giant saliva!! Run Anna Run, hope somebody rescues her!! )
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Post by bookworm101 on Dec 13, 2009 9:53:39 GMT -5
Damn! Epic! This story is awesome! Can't wait to see what happens next!!!
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Post by Bloodcore on Dec 13, 2009 11:17:01 GMT -5
Sweet! Thanks!
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Post by wolfgirl76112 on Dec 18, 2009 9:10:34 GMT -5
aww man this is a good story ^^
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Post by Bloodcore on Dec 18, 2009 22:48:05 GMT -5
Thanks.
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Post by Bloodcore on Dec 20, 2009 15:25:19 GMT -5
*Next part. Sorry it took so long. Comments make me smile!*
Kevin took his own shirt off and held me down with a finger. My heart was beating so hard, it started to hurt. I whispered,
"Please...No..." I knew I was powerless. There was nothing I could do. Except, maybe...I screamed as loud as I could,
"JOESPH!!!"
.................... BAM! The door flew open as Joe catapulted onto Kevin. With Kevins finger off of me, I leaped up and backed off as far as I could. I could see faint traces of blood on Joes knuckles. Wow, I guess he really DID beat the shit out of Nick. I could also see that Joe was punching Kevin in the face as hard as he could while shouting,
"WHAT THE FUCK *punch* WERE YOU *punch* THINKING OF DOING?!!!" All the while, however, Kevin was grinning away, which kinda creeped me out insanely.
Finally Kevin seemed to have blacked out. He slid down the wall he was being held up against with blood caked on his face. Joe slowly turned around to face me. He knelt down to my level, brought his face closer to mine, and softly brushed my hair out of my face.
"I'm sorry. I should have known about Kev-" His sentence was cut short because I had planted my lips on his lower lip.
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Post by bookworm101 on Dec 20, 2009 15:29:15 GMT -5
Don't worry about taking so long! It was another awsome update that was worht the wait! I loved the sweet moment at the end!!!!!!!!! Another terrific job, deary. Keep up the awesome work!!
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Post by Bloodcore on Dec 20, 2009 17:43:05 GMT -5
>/////< Thanks a lot!
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