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Post by bookworm101 on Jan 16, 2010 13:44:09 GMT -5
Whoop! Go ninja roll! ...sounds kinda like sushi.... Legasp! HAs Nick had other little peoples? Bad nick!! You do not kidnap, it is wrong!!! Anywho, how was Mexico?
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Post by Bloodcore on Jan 16, 2010 14:36:12 GMT -5
Kekeke! You're funny! Mexico was great, thanks! The Mayan Riviera! There were like 15 bars in the resort and there was a self-serve, soft-serve ice cream machine. I went nuts!
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Post by Bloodcore on Jan 23, 2010 9:48:10 GMT -5
*Continued*
"There were *cough* more like me?" I spat at Nick. His eyes gained a saddened look, as if remembering something terrible.
"Oh yeah, they weren't annoying or insolent like you though, you little shit!" He hissed. Maybe, just maybe, Nick knew what happened to me. Did he cause it somehow?
"Tell me about them!" I shouted. He grimaced while saying,
"Might as well. You're gonna die anyway."
"A few years ago, I found them. There were about five of them huddled in a corner on a street. They were even smaller than you, probably came up to your hips. I reached for them, but they screamed and said some stuff, trying to send me away. Couldn't even understand what they were saying, they were so small. I cupped my hands around them to protect them from the cold and ran home."
Wow, this bastard was so kind back then. What happened? I wondered.
"When I got home and into my room, I put them on my bed and just stared at them. They stared back, terrified. I tried to be kind and gentle with them. I whispered so I didn't hurt their ears. They were still scared. The youngest ones were bawling their eyes out. There was nothing I could really do. So I just left food on the bed and watched from a distance. They ate it in minutes. I came closer but they weren't scared anymore it seemed. They gestured to lower my head towards them, I did, and then they just kissed my face."
Nick then proceeded to touch his face dreamily for a second but then snapped back into reality.
"Over the course of a few weeks, they had begun to treat me as if I were their God. Trying to please me by any means. But then...THE LITTLE SHITS BETRAYED ME!!"
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Post by Bloodcore on Jan 30, 2010 0:02:19 GMT -5
*Yeesh, this board has been a freakin' ghost town lately!*
Tears were starting to pool in Nicks eyes. His breaths were becoming gasps as he tried to hold back his sadness. I felt a sting of pity. It was very sad, watching this behemoth suffer while terrible memories bubbled back up. No! I had to remember what this bastard is, a terrible giant that almost killed me. Twice.
"I was bringing food to my subjects," I was startled when he talked.
"I saw that they were trying to work my cell phone, trying to call for help. I was devastated. They had earned my trust and they decided to break it. And my heart." That quote wrenched my heart strongly. The lummox loved them.
"They had to die." WHAT. You know what? I'll take back everything nice I said about him.
"I decided to torture each and every one of them. I stepped on them, ate them, did everything I could trying to destroy them. They all did the same thing you did...They all died immediately though, why do you last longer?" He asked.
I had lost all sympathy for this fucker, so,
"Alice helps me. She exists inside me, so it's like I have two immune systems. Everything heals twice as fast. What you did to me the first time? Healed in a single night." I belted. I felt no reason to hold back on any of my secrets anymore. Confusion covered Nicks face. Of course he wouldn't know who Alice is, I only told Joe.
"However, she seems to be rejecting me. All the damage I'm taking is affecting me on the inside. It won't matter if you kill me now, I'M GONNA DIE SOON ANYWAY!!"
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Post by natalie on Jan 30, 2010 0:11:50 GMT -5
I agree with you about this board being a ghost town, Yahoo, an update!! Thanks for the update!! Good one!!
I don't feel sorry for Nick either, what jerk!!
You go girl, stand up to him, don't go down without a fight.
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Post by Bloodcore on Jan 30, 2010 12:00:26 GMT -5
Thanks a lot. There's no way Anna's gonna go down without a fight!
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Post by bookworm101 on Feb 1, 2010 17:00:34 GMT -5
lol. I woudl hope not!! that's so un-Anna like!! Very good update!!! I really liked it!! This board has been a ghost town, I agree. I guees people are really busy.....
But, any way, I love this story!!! I hope you update soon!!
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Post by Bloodcore on Feb 5, 2010 21:02:40 GMT -5
*Next part. Thanks for the feedback.*
"Tch. So it doesn't matter hunh? If I kill you?" Nick spat, grinning.
"Nope. Do whatcha what!" I hissed. I stopped and thought for a moment.
"Ah, but does your heart hurt?" I asked. Nick was in the middle of dropping me to the ground. He stopped.
"Hah?! What the fuck are you talking about?! Don't interrupt me when I'm killing you!" Nick growled. I just laughed.
"Hee hee hee...Your reaction just told me EVERYTHING. It hurts. Your heart." I bared my teeth, letting my blood flow across, dying my fangs crimson. Nicks pupils dilated so far they became slits.
"WHAT DID YOU SAY?!!" He roared.
"They held a place inside your massive heart. You cut their lives short and your heart seems to have died." I said. His grip loosened on my arm (I lost my shirt, remember? I'm just hangin' there with a bra and ripped kapris.). Nicks mouth gaped open. Moving soundlessly.
"But! FRIENDSHIP ISN'T SOMETHING YOU CAN JUST ERASE! IT'S A CONNECTION OF SPIRITS THAT NOTHING CAN BREAK! YOUR HEART DOESN'T DESERVE TO PUMP WITH THEIR BLOOD!" I screamed. I wrenched my arm out of his grip and leapt onto his nose. Staring directly into his eye, I yelled,
"CAN'T YOU HEAR?! THEIR SCREAMS ARE ECHOING THROUGH YOUR CHEST! SCREAMS OF PAIN! BETRAYAL!" That was Nicks breaking point. He collapsed into tears. His cries carried through the house.
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Post by natalie on Feb 6, 2010 0:52:28 GMT -5
Go, girl, you show him!!
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Post by bookworm101 on Feb 8, 2010 17:19:19 GMT -5
Whoop!! Go Anna!! GO Anna!! Show that dude who's boss!!! She amy be tiny, but she causes hell...
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Post by Bloodcore on Feb 12, 2010 13:50:37 GMT -5
Nick collapsed on the floor in tears. Guess my mindfuck powers worked! Yay me. I jumped off of his face and landed on the floor. Then everything lurched sideways. I fell face-first into my own blood and fainted.
"You fucking idiot! Did we not make a deal that as long as you keep my existence a secret, I would keep healing you?!" I was back in the black, blood-filled world, talking face-to-face with Alice. Alice was ranting about the deal.
"Shit Alice, I had to. Joe was trustworthy." I whispered.
"Trustworthy. TRUSTWORTHY?! Nobody is worth trusting in this world, you know that!" She screamed.
I broke, "SHUT THE FUCK UP!!"
"Whoa! Wha..?!"
I was on a couch, dwarfed by the gargantuan cushions. I looked through hazy eyes and saw Kevin, hiding on the very edge of the couch.
"Uh...Hi?" He said, grinning like a fool.
"The fuck do you want, perv?" I growled. I was in no mood to be screwed with. Or raped.
"Don't call me that. Don't remind me." Kevin said strongly. "I'm only here to help."
I felt something on my chest and back. I looked down. I was wearing a poncho?
"Did you make this for me?" I asked.
"Yes." I felt touched. However, back to reality I was brought. I stood up and walked to the edge.
"Kev. Please put me on the ground." I ordered.
"Huh? Uh...OK." He held out his hand and I stepped into it. He then lowered me onto the ground. He also lay on his stomach and looked straight at me.
"Is there something you want?" He asked. His brown eyes bored into me.
"Take me to the door and open it. Please." I said. Kevin's eyebrows nearly shot off his face.
"Let you out?!" He yelled. I put my finger to my lips.
"Shhh. Not so loud big guy." I hissed.
"But I can't do that, you'll die." He cried, tears welling up.
"Jesus, here come the waterworks. Listen Kevin, I have to go back living on my own. I can't get soft here. Sorry." I looked at him with serious eyes. He looked like he understood. Kevin picked me up and took me to the door and opened it.
"I'm sorry...Can't you stay?" He sobbed. I shook my head.
"Don't tell Joe, kay? What can I say? It's been...Horrifying!" I yelled. Then I left that house and into the falling rain.
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Post by Bloodcore on Feb 19, 2010 0:31:46 GMT -5
SEVEN DAYS LATER
Fuck, this was bad idea. Leaving my captor's house was probably the worst idea I had ever had. Not long after I left, a dog tried to take a bite out of me. It got my leg. There's quite a large chunk ripped out of my left leg that always oozes blood and it hurts to walk. I wanted to cry so hard, but I couldn't for some reason. Here I was, in some godforsaken alley, waiting for blood loss and infection to kill me. I almost laughed. I was known for the terror I inflicted when I was normal sized, but now look at me. I craned my neck up to the grey sky and said,
"God, if you want me to die then just do it already. You know I can't go on like this...If you want to save me, then do it."
"Well, well, well..."
I jerked my head back down. Why was that voice familiar? I saw another giant person who leaned down and squinted at me. My eyes widened. Shit! It was the guy who shot the formula into me. I screamed up at him,
"Motherfucker! You bastard did this to me! Fix this shit now!"
He sarcastically cupped a hand around his ear, as if trying to strain his hearing.
"Huh? What was that? Didn't sound like you saying sorry for trying to murder me hunh?" He laughed. The prick was making fun of me. I hate it when people make fun of me.
"OY, SHIT STAIN!! I'M NEVER GONNA SAY SORRY!! IF THIS WAS GOING TO HAPPEN, I SHOULD HAVE KILLED YOU THEN!!" I roared. His grin was wiped off of his face. He reached down and snatched me up. While doing this, he caused a lot of pressure on my damaged leg, making me scream in agony. My scream vibrated off of the stone walls of the alley and, even though I'm so small, probably for a larger radius. The man growled while saying,
"I don't give a shit about you, so I'm gonna make you my test subject." And then started walking off, placing me in his coat pocket where I blanked out.
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Post by Bloodcore on Feb 26, 2010 18:41:23 GMT -5
*Behold, the second to last chapter!*
Being on that table was horrible. The scientist, as it turns out, strapped me to the table and began sticking tubes and needles into me. I screamed bloody murder for hours. This is a description of me now. A tiny teenage girl with metal rods jutting out of my legs, tubes running in and out of my left arm, my right arm is nothing but a bloody stump and blood is running out my mouth every second. A machine was hooked up to me, keeping me alive even though I wanted to die. He leaned over me and said,
"I gotta make a few adjustments, kay?" Then he turned on a switch that sent my muscles into spasms so bad, my legs started to bruise from the inside. I yelled out once more. Not a scream but names.
"NICK!! KEVIN!! JOE!!!!!"
"Shut it dearie! No one can hear you!"
"FUCK YOU ASSHOLE!!" A voice rang out. A fist slammed itself against the scientist's face and sent him flying.
"Jesus, the hell did they do to you...? Anna.....?"
I grinned weakly, blood spurting from my lips, "Why'd you take so long Joe?
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Post by Bloodcore on Mar 5, 2010 19:27:33 GMT -5
*HERE WE GO!! LAST CHAPTER!!*
Joe, Kevin, and Nick's faces hung over me as they released the restraints hold me down. Such a shame that those restraints also stopped the blood flow, so when they were released, blood flowed out of my body. My vision was faded and swimming. I didn't have anymore time.
"Anna...Why?" Joe whispered as tears slid down his cheeks, dripping onto me.
"I couldn't... get soft." I sighed, shrugging weakly, making more blood spurt out of my missing arm. I looked over at Kevin and Nick.
"Kevin, why didja... tell him...? Nick...You had... a change of... heart?" I continued. Kevin shook his head, he cried softly. Nick even had some tears in his eyes. Joe laughed and looked back at me.
"Anna, I w-" He started.
"SELF-DESTRUCTION ACTIVATED. 30 SECONDS UNTIL DETONATION." A siren blared. I turned my head and saw the scientist, who had a hand on a huge red button and blood coming out of his eye and nose. He grinned.
"Die with me" Nick darted forward and kicked the scientist in the throat. His throat was crushed and, with no way to breathe, thus he died. Debris fell all around us, eventually crushing the corpse. Kevin screamed,
"WE GOTTA GET OUT!! NOW!!" Nick and Joe looked back at me and Joe reached for me. I slapped his hand away the best I could. All three of them stared at me. I knew I couldn't be saved. Why just prolong that? Joe yelled at me,
"PLEASE!! GET IN MY HAND!! LIVE DAMMIT!!" I shook my head. I had the choice of dying now and I wanted to take it. I glared at all three of them while the counter called out ten seconds. I said softly,
"Alice... may not be... on my side........But I've got three... Gods who sure as hell are...." I turned away and looked at the debris falling down............................................................
Darkness. That's all I saw when I closed my eyes. I never opened them again.
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Post by Satal on Mar 6, 2010 3:38:16 GMT -5
Surprise ending was a surprise. Good job finishing your first story.
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Post by Bloodcore on Mar 6, 2010 10:05:57 GMT -5
Thank you!!
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