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Post by bookworm101 on Dec 21, 2009 12:21:42 GMT -5
No problem. It really is an awesome story! I love the way you keep finding a way to put Anna into some kind of trouble. It's terrible for her, but it makes an awesome story.
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Post by Bloodcore on Dec 28, 2009 14:07:36 GMT -5
*Next part*
Whoa, whoa, whoa! What the hell am I doing?! I was just about to get raped by a giant (God knows how that would have worked), and now I planted my lips on Joes' lower lip. I pulled back sharply and looked up at his face. He was blushing like mad and he was staring into space.
"Ah...Er...I...Oh god, I'm sorry..." I stuttered. He pulled out of his trance and said strongly,
"Don't be. It's normal." Joe then cupped a hand around me in as well as a hug he could do. When we broke the hug, I glanced over at the KO'ed mountain called Kevin. I couldn't help but feel a twinge of pity as well as a sharp spark of pain which I ignored. Kevins' nose was crooked, I noticed. I walked towards him, only to walk face first into a wall of skin and muscle. Joe had slammed his hand in front of me, creating a barrier, separating me from Kevin. His voice boomed around me,
"What are you doing?"
"I'm going to fix him." I said simply. "Move your hand."
Joe hesitantly raised his hand and allowed me to walk towards his brother.
Lucky for me, Kevins' unconscious head was leaning against the bed, so I jumped off the bed and landed in his curly bed of hair. I sunk rather deep into the locks that smelled strongly of hair products. It was very hard to move but I somehow made it to the cliff-like forehead. I uncurled one clump of hair and scaled down the enormous face until I came to his nose. I whispered,
"I'm sorry, buddy. This may hurt." With that, I grasped the tip of his nose and used all of my strength to twist the whole nose until I heard a *crack*. Kevins' eyes snapped open and he screamed like a banshee.
*Comments make me smile, if you make me smile you get a cookie!*
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Post by bookworm101 on Dec 28, 2009 22:48:35 GMT -5
I know I've said this a thousand times before, but.........I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!! It's friggen awesome, man.
....Can I have my cookie now? I like chocolate chip.....XD.
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Post by Bloodcore on Dec 29, 2009 13:59:00 GMT -5
Oh my god, thanks!
Here ya go! *hands over SUV sized choco-chip cookie*
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Post by wolfgirl76112 on Dec 29, 2009 17:07:45 GMT -5
Haha this a good funny story heeh
and hehe this part was funny ^^
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Post by Bloodcore on Dec 29, 2009 18:45:02 GMT -5
Thanks.
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Post by bookworm101 on Dec 30, 2009 10:21:59 GMT -5
Oh my god, thanks! Here ya go! *hands over SUV sized choco-chip cookie* WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! a GIANT COOKIE! AND IT'S CHOCOLATE CHIP! YOU'RE THE BEST! I'M REVEIWNG THIS STORY MORE OFTEN!!
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Post by Bloodcore on Dec 30, 2009 12:21:51 GMT -5
Thanks a lot!
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Post by bookworm101 on Dec 30, 2009 12:29:31 GMT -5
I" love this story! I'd reveiw even if their wasn't a cookie as a reward!!! It's a wondeful story!!
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Post by Bloodcore on Jan 1, 2010 1:38:35 GMT -5
*Next part. Thanks for all the positive reviews!*
I held on for my life as Kevin wrenched his head around, dealing with the pain of a twisted, broken nose. Lord almighty! It's like the guy never felt pain before! Tears streamed down his cheeks. Joe was restraining Kevin by the arms, preventing him from ripping me off of his face. I realized that I had twisted his nose wrong.
"WRONG WAY!!!" I screamed, using the remainder of my strength to fix my mistake. *CRACK*
"THERE WE GO!!" Kevin stopped writhing around (finally!) and Joe let go. Without missing a beat, Kevin plucked me off his face and held me in front of his eyes. His eyes were filled with tears and regret.
"After what I tried to do, why do you feel such kindness for me?" He sobbed. I was always uncomfortable with being held by the back of my shirt in front of two car-sized eyes (well, aren't we all?) So I used my upper body strength to wrench myself up and latched my legs around his finger, so he let go. I smiled grimly while saying,
"Know this, I will never forgive you, even on my deathbed, but I felt pity for you, dumbass!" Kevin lowered his head like a naughty child being scolded.
"I'm so sorry!" He cried. I scoffed and glanced at Joe. He nodded, seeming to know what I need him to do. I looked back at the quivering giant. This time, I smiled warmly.
"Whatever." And with those words, I immediately let go of his finger and plummeted down to the ground. Joes' hand shot out and grabbed hold of me. Once again I felt that sharp sting of pain. This time, a cough came with it. I covered my mouth immediately. When I pulled my hand back, my heart stopped beating for a few seconds. Crimson blood was splattered across my palm.
"You alright?" The god holding me asked. I nodded my head. Just let him be blissful.
*Comments make me smile! Happy new year to all!*
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Post by Bloodcore on Jan 1, 2010 15:24:46 GMT -5
Gotta know, who's still reading this story? I'm not going to cut it off, I just want to know. I'm going to write it to the end.
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Post by natalie on Jan 3, 2010 3:32:37 GMT -5
I'm reading it!! its good.
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Post by bookworm101 on Jan 3, 2010 9:28:28 GMT -5
Me! Me! I be reading this! Tis awesome, hon. And, by the way, excellent chapter.
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Post by Bloodcore on Jan 3, 2010 11:49:52 GMT -5
Great, thanks.
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Post by Bloodcore on Jan 3, 2010 21:13:35 GMT -5
*Next part. This is going to be the last one for a while, I'm going to Mexico for a week.*
As Joe left the room, carrying me, I saw Nick leaning over a nearby sink with an ice pack applied to his face. His eyes drifted over to us. His eyes were glazed over in hate and I noticed that he had dark circles under his eyes that I've never seen before. He smiled cruelly and I was shocked to see blood-stained teeth. Nick dropped the ice pack and sauntered over to us.
"Well, well. If it isn't Joes' little princess. Never gonna fight your battles anymore huh? Always gonna have Joe?"
He said as he thrust his face close to me, my vision quickly filled by his face. The stench of his breath mixed with iron was over-powering me. High above me, Joe growled,
"Nick, don't make me hurt you again. You're my brother, I love you." Swift as a bullet, Nick punched Joe in the stomach. While Joe wheezed, gasped, and started to double over, I fell off of his hand only to be caught by Nick. The barely conscious Joe tried to reach for me, but the evil monster that held me uppercutted him. He blacked out immediately. Laughter as loud as thunder ran out and severely hurt my ears.
"You LOVE me?! Hahahaha!! Is that why you beat the shit out of me?! Hahahaha-FUCKING BULLSHIT!!!"
Oh God, whom I hate so much, if you do exist, please save me! I thought uselessly. Nick had finished his rant and turned his attention towards me.
"Awww, don't worry dear." He started to stroke my hair lightly.
"I'm gonna torture you, THEN kill you!!" He then put me down roughly on the floor and reared to his full height. I'd never gotten a good look at any of their full heights until now. He really was a human skyscraper. Nick seemed to get an idea as he removed his socks from his titanic feet. The smell was so horrible, it made me gag. But his demands were worse.
"Kiss 'em." He spat. I jerked my head up.
"What?!" I whispered. He gained an insulted expression.
"Did you not hear me?! Pay respects to your GOD!!"
I'm sorry, what? My what? GOD?!! I burst out laughing at the absurdity of that idea. Ridiculous! With tears in my eyes from laughing so hard, I looked up at the obviously insane mountain-of-a-guy. He did not look happy.
*Comments are appreiated. See you in a week.*
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Post by natalie on Jan 6, 2010 22:14:06 GMT -5
Way to go girl, take a stand!! Great update!!
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Post by bookworm101 on Jan 8, 2010 16:37:02 GMT -5
Excellent!!! I love this story!!! Please update soon!!!!
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Post by Bloodcore on Jan 11, 2010 20:21:09 GMT -5
Sorry. I just got back from Mexico. I'll update soon.
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Post by Bloodcore on Jan 14, 2010 19:10:17 GMT -5
I swear to God, I'll update tomorrow.
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Post by Bloodcore on Jan 15, 2010 19:50:23 GMT -5
*All right, rock 'n roll. Let's do this. I know you guys have been waiting for this.*
"Ah-hahaha.... Ahhhh, you're too funny... Thinking you're a deity... Absurd idea." I giggled. I stopped immediately. Was it just me or was there something similar to a charge in the air? A huge toe slammed into my stomach, knocking the wind out of me and propelling me a few inches back. As I wheezed for breath, the air teamed with that damn cackling voice,
"Well, you're on your knees, that's a good start." Nick said smugly. During my first encounter with him, I had lost my trusty knife, so I had no weapons. However, that doesn't mean I still couldn't try to kick his ass! Once I had my breath back, I bit as hard as I could on his gigantic toe. I only caused the titan to laugh sadly. My tiny teeth couldn't cut through the leathery hide. I was doomed. Fuck.
Nick twitched his toe and I was forced to let go. I was flung on my back and stayed there. Nick sneered and said,
"Better, much better." He lowered his foot just above me. I felt sick to my stomach. Just as he was about to lower it all the way, I did a perfect ninja roll out of the area. That was lucky, I thought. I suddenly was pushed onto the floor by an insane amount of pressure. Nick had slammed his hand on me, pinning me to the floor. I vomited up a round of blood. He roughly picked me up and raised me higher and higher until I stopped at his eyes.
"The other little people did the same thing." Nick said.
*WUT. Ninja roll FTW! Comments make me smile!*
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